NightFloyd Transcript:
Bear Creek by Wes Modes
As played on ifMUD on May 1, 2014

Like ClubFloyd, the idea behind NightFloyd is that a group of people meet online to cooperatively play a game of interactive fiction.

Unlike ClubFloyd, NightFloyd often takes on significantly larger works of interactive fiction, knowing going in that each one will take multiple sessions (but not always, as you'll see in this transcript). NightFloyd is also a bit more informal than ClubFloyd in that it's only announced on the ifMUD #clubfloyd bulletin board, and the time shifts around to meet player's schedules far more than ClubFloyd does. NightFloyd is organized by genericgeekgirl, aka Adri.

Below is a transcript of Bear Creek written by Wes Modes. It was released as part of the 2014 Spring Thing. You can learn more about the game, including how to download it, by visiting IFDB.


WARNING! Below you will find a transcript of people playing this game, and it goes without saying that the transcript is full of spoilers. So, if you've never played this game, and think you might like to at some point, I do not recommend reading any further. Instead, you might want to return to the interactive fiction page.


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genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "load sleepmask bearcreek"
Floyd | %% Critical error.
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Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Part 1
Floyd | A Fateful Day
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |   
Floyd |
Floyd | What's too painful to remember
Floyd |  We simply choose to forget
Floyd |  -- Gladys Knight And The Pips, 1975
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
Zach pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 1
Floyd |
Floyd | You've wandered away from Honey and Grandpa picking blackberries.
Floyd |
Floyd | Bear Creek
Floyd | an interactive fiction
Floyd | by Wes Modes
Floyd |
Floyd | You were sure that this was a better spot than where you've been
Floyd | picking all morning. But here too, the biggest ripest berries seem to
Floyd | be just out of reach. You pick a few ripe berries and drop them in
Floyd | your pail. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "about"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 1
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ABOUT
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 2
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a pail, inside which is a bunch of ripe berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 3
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You've picked a big bunch of blackberries. Looking at them, you notice
Floyd | that the color goes from deep red to deepest black.  A couple of these
Floyd | berries are kind of too ripe and look like little raisins.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "eat berry"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 4
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EAT BERRY
Floyd |
Floyd | You eat a few of the berries. Delicious.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "pick berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 5
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PICK BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You stretch and manage to pick a few ripe blackberries. You drop the
Floyd | berries into your pail.
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Lucy In the Sky With Diamonds", begins playing on the nearby
Floyd | radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach sings, "Blackberry fields forever"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x radio"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 5
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RADIO
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "listen"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 6
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LISTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear the nearby radio playing "Lucy In the Sky With Diamonds". And
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are talking nearby.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 7
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Lost in the Brambles
Floyd | This spot, a little ways from where Honey and Grandpa are picking, has
Floyd | some good berries. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x trees"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 8
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TREES
Floyd |
Floyd | Pine trees fringe the tangle of berry brambles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x me"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 9
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ME
Floyd |
Floyd | What's to say? You are eight and a half, and you are going into 4th
Floyd | grade in the fall. And you like watching the Wonderful World of Disney
Floyd | on Sunday night and Bowling for Dollars with your grandpa.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | On the nearby radio, a new song begins: "Before the Next Teardrop
Floyd | Falls" by Freddy Fender, a good one.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Woof."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "dance"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 9
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DANCE
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "xyzzy"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 9
Floyd | >
Floyd | > XYZZY
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Whoops, there's something I forgot to put in my game"
Zach exclaims, "But not dancing!!!"
genericgeekgirl D
genericgeekgirl says, "\:D"
genericgeekgirl says, "Argh."
genericgeekgirl says, "Anyway."
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  10
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | The water churgles in the nearby creek but you can't see it through
Floyd | the forest of blackberry brambles all around you. Every summer since
Floyd | you were little, you pick blackberries with your Honey and Grandpa
Floyd | down along Bear Creak. This is a pleasant clearing carpeted with
Floyd | stubbly grass under a sycamore tree. There are paths and clearings
Floyd | beaten down among the brambles that allow you to squeeze in to get the
Floyd | ripest berries. There is a big bucket in the middle of the clearing.
Floyd | Grandpa's shirt and Honey's portable transistor radio are on the bank
Floyd | under the tree playing music.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around, you see places you can go: Along the path and down the
Floyd | creek, there's a tangle of blackberry bushes. Up the hill is the
Floyd | blackberry brambles where you've been picking for a while.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are here picking berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey hi, Bud," Grandpa says.
Floyd |
Floyd | You get a funny, sad feeling out of nowhere, that this is the last
Floyd | time you will pick berries with Honey and Grandpa.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x honey"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  11
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X HONEY
Floyd |
Floyd | She's stern with a sneaky smile. Sometimes you think you hate Honey.
Floyd | Though, thinking about it, you remember how when you stayed the summer
Floyd | at Honey and Grandpa's house, she taught you to make pots on the
Floyd | potter's wheel. And how she took you for a ride on the motorcycle. You
Floyd | know she loves you, but why does she have to be so mean sometimes?
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x grandpa"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  12
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa is, well, Grandpa. He's not tall. He's not fat. He has a bald
Floyd | spot right on top of his head like a little hat. He's like a bull,
Floyd | kind of, but skinnier and wears a warm plaid shirt. Today he's in a
Floyd | t-shirt, but usually. He smells good, like cigarettes and that stuff
Floyd | he puts on his face when he shaves.
Floyd |
Floyd | While you are looking, he sees you and smiles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "smile"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  12
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SMILE
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Boo."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x radio"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  13
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RADIO
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey's little portable transistor radio is sitting on the bank beside
Floyd | grandpa's shirt under the tree. You've always been fascinated by it,
Floyd | as much by its perfect cube shape and woodgrain finish as anything.
Floyd | The tiny volume knob is missing, but there is a piece of something
Floyd | that looks like wax or plastic jammed in its place. The radio is on
Floyd | and is tuned to a station playing pop music.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey's radio playing a new song: "How Sweet It Is To Be
Floyd | Loved By You," one of your favorites.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  14
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a big bucket that Honey and Grandpa have been putting their
Floyd | berries into, about a quarter full.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "kick bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  15
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KICK BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | A glance from Honey and you get the message that you better not.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa continue their conversation: "Have you heard from
Floyd | Nick about this summer? Is he planning a visit or are we just left
Floyd | guessing?" Grandpa asks Honey.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Nothing. Not a word," Honey says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Hee!"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "talk to honey"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  16
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO HONEY
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hello, kiddo," Honey says.
Floyd |
Floyd | "You're tuneless whistling again," Honey says to Grandpa. You hadn't
Floyd | even noticed any whistling.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "talk to grandpa"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  17
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well hi, Whistle Britches," Grandpa says.
Floyd |
Floyd | After a DJ break, Honey's radio's playing "You're No Good" by Linda
Floyd | Ronstadt, a good one.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Did you call Rachel?" Honey asks Grandpa. "Sounded like she wanted to
Floyd | talk to her dad."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask honey about rachel"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  18
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK HONEY ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | "Don't worry about your mom," Honey says, "She'll be fine. Why don't
Floyd | you go over and help your grandpa some."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about nick"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  19
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT NICK
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your dad? Well," Grandpa says, "you know, he and I always got along
Floyd | fine. I think he's a good guy, but I don't like that he doesn't see
Floyd | much of you."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about mom"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  20
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT MOM
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa didn't seem to hear you.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa pauses for a minute from his berry picking and lights a
Floyd | cigarette and smokes for a bit.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well, Noodle, your dad is what he is, I guess," Grandpa says, "I
Floyd | think he loves you but doesn't always know how to show it."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about rachel"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  21
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Pick Up the Pieces", begins playing on Honey's radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your mom? What's on your mind, Tootsie Roll?" Grandpa looks serious,
Floyd | "Don't worry about her. She can take care of herself. Your mama will
Floyd | always love you more than anything in the whole world."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Strange that it doesn't alias."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask rachel about nick"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  21
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK RACHEL ABOUT NICK
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Oops."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask honey about nick"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  22
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK HONEY ABOUT NICK
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your mom's just gone to work things out with your step-dad." Grandpa
Floyd | forces a smile, "You watch, she'll be back in a jiffy. She should be
Floyd | home tomorrow. But she'll be okay."
Floyd |
Floyd | "Did you get a birthday card from him this year? No? Surprise! I
Floyd | didn't think so," Honey says angrily. Is she mad at you? Or mad at
Floyd | your dad? But why?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "He's a bum"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "whistle"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  22
Floyd | >
Floyd | > WHISTLE
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Grandpa seems to have an endless supply of nicknames for the PC, which annoys me somewhat."
genericgeekgirl says, "I bet he has even more interesting ones for Honey >:D"
Zach says, "oh my"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "help grandpa"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  22
Floyd | >
Floyd | > HELP GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | I didn't understand that sentence.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about love"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  23
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT LOVE
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa is still talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your mama will be just fine," Grandpa says.
Floyd |
Floyd | "We haven't heard from him this whole year. I guess no visit with your
Floyd | dad this summer," Honey says with a grim smile.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about berries"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  24
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | "How you doing, JoJo?" Grandpa pats your head. "You helping your Honey
Floyd | and grandpa make blackberry jam?"
Floyd |
Floyd | "I think it takes more than being at the right place at the right time
Floyd | to be a father," Honey says, and after a moment, "Sorry, sweetie, I'm
Floyd | not mad at you. I'm mad about grown up stuff."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  25
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | That's going to be pretty heavy. Better leave it for Grandpa to carry.
Floyd |
Floyd | After a DJ break, Honey's radio's playing "Rhinestone Cowboy," a song
Floyd | you really like.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I'm done waiting for him to step up and be your father," Honey says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "btw, we can pour our berries into the bucket. That's the primary control to getting past this first scene."
Zach says, ">ask honey about minding your own damn business"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  26
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a pail, inside which is a bunch of ripe berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pour pail into bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  27
Floyd | >
Floyd | > POUR PAIL INTO BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You empty the bunch of ripe berries from the pail into the big bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I'll call her tonight, see how she is," Grandpa says to Honey.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We might have to pick more berries until the bucket is full enough."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 28
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Lost in the Brambles
Floyd | This spot, a little ways from where Honey and Grandpa are picking, has
Floyd | some good berries. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pick berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 29
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PICK BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You notice some ripe ones down near your knees and grab a bunch of
Floyd | ripe blackberries. You drop the berries into your pail.
Floyd |
Floyd | On the nearby radio, a new song begins: "Never Can Say Goodbye".
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey and Grandpa talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 30
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | By working on tiptoes, you are just able to pick a few  ripe
Floyd | blackberries. You drop the berries into your pail which is about half
Floyd | full.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 31
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | You notice some ripe ones down near your knees and grab a bunch of
Floyd | ripe blackberries. You drop the berries into the pail which is getting
Floyd | close to full.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 32
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | By working on tiptoes, you are just able to pick a few  ripe
Floyd | blackberries. You carefully put these blackberries in the pail which
Floyd | is now heaping.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey and Grandpa talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "down"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  33
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DOWN
Floyd |
Floyd | With your heaping full pail, you imagine tripping and blackberries
Floyd | going everywhere and getting in trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | You are near the creek, but it can't be seen through the blackberry
Floyd | brambles. This is a pleasant clearing carpeted with stubbly grass
Floyd | under a sycamore tree. There are paths and clearings beaten down among
Floyd | the brambles that allow you to squeeze in to get the ripest berries.
Floyd | There is a big bucket in the middle of the clearing. Grandpa's shirt
Floyd | and Honey's portable transistor radio are on the bank under the tree
Floyd | playing music.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the path and down the creek, there's a tangle of blackberry
Floyd | bushes. Up the hill is the blackberry brambles where you've been
Floyd | picking for a while.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are here picking berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey's radio playing a new song: "Shining Star".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Haha, really."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pour pail into bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  34
Floyd | >
Floyd | > POUR PAIL INTO BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You empty the bunch of ripe berries from the pail into the big bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  35
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a big bucket that Honey and Grandpa have been putting their
Floyd | berries into, about a quarter full.
Floyd |
Floyd | You wander a little distance away, but close enough that you can still
Floyd | hear. "I do not like the way he treats, ah, the little one. At all."
Floyd | Grampa says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Gerynar arrives, full of fun and funk. genericgeekgirl says, "Tedious."
genericgeekgirl asks, "Are we able to explore further?"
Zach asks, "Down?"
genericgeekgirl says, ""along the path and down the creek""
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "down"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    36
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DOWN
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey notices as you go past.
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Tangle
Floyd | There are paths through the brambles, a maze with tantalizing fruit.
Floyd | Although this area is mostly picked since you and Honey and Grandpa
Floyd | came this way when you started picking this morning. You can still
Floyd | find some ripe berries though.
Floyd |
Floyd | Through the blackberry tangle, there's a trail going down along the
Floyd | creek shaded by lush green willow trees. Back the way you came is the
Floyd | clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey and Grandpa talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    37
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You stretch and manage to pick a few ripe blackberries. You drop the
Floyd | berries into your pail.
Floyd |
Floyd | On the nearby radio, a new song begins: "My Eyes Adored You" by
Floyd | Frankie Valli, a good one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey and Grandpa talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We can explore a bit but not too too far."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "down"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  38
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DOWN
Floyd |
Floyd | Ever vigilant, Honey looks down the trail and sees you wandering.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey, why don't you stay here with us? Don't you want to help your
Floyd | Honey and grandpa?" You reluctantly head back to the clearing.
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd |
Floyd | "Did you ask about the arm?" Honey asks Grandpa, glancing in your
Floyd | direction.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Ah."
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x arm"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  39
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | By working on tiptoes, you are just able to pick a few  ripe
Floyd | blackberries. You drop the berries into your pail which is about half
Floyd | full.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa pauses for a minute from his berry picking and wipes his
Floyd | forehead with his handkerchief and rests against a tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  40
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ARM
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking carefully, you can see marks on your arm where your step-dad
Floyd | grabbed you, and it's still a little tender
Floyd |
Floyd | "I did ask about the arm, but I didn't find out anything," Grandpa
Floyd | says, looking over at you. "To think that asshole, pardon my French,
Floyd | might have..." Grandpa just shakes his head.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Eek"
genericgeekgirl says, "Lovely."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "rub arm"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  41
Floyd | >
Floyd | > RUB ARM
Floyd |
Floyd | You achieve nothing by this.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear Honey's radio playing a new song: "Mandy," one you like to
Floyd | sing to.
Floyd |
Floyd | ""I don't put anything past him when he's been drinking," Honey says
Floyd | to Grandpa. "Yeah, he's a charmer. What were you thinking, Rachel?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "The subplot is why I was reluctant to continue much past this intro scene."
genericgeekgirl nods.
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  42
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You notice some ripe ones down near your knees and grab a bunch of
Floyd | ripe blackberries. You drop the berries into the pail which is getting
Floyd | close to full.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey, sweetie," Honey calls to you. "When you go with grandpa to take
Floyd | the bucket to the trailer, can you ask Mary about lunch?"
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Mandy! I love this song."
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  43
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | By working on tiptoes, you are just able to pick a few  ripe
Floyd | blackberries. You carefully put these blackberries in the pail which
Floyd | is now heaping. That should be enough to satisfy Honey.
Floyd |
Floyd | Even though you love picking blackberries -- and you certainly love
Floyd | blackberry jam, blackberry pie, blackberry and cream, or just eating
Floyd | fresh blackberries -- you've been picking berries all morning. You
Floyd | must have picked a million pails already. And you want to see
Floyd | if the red ants ate the dead cricket you put near their hole. Oh, and
Floyd | you want to see if you can find a lucky penny. And you may even wanna
Floyd | swim.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | You should probably dump the berries in Honey and Grandpa's bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  44
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | Your full pail is making you nervous.
Floyd |
Floyd | You could never remember which way was which, and without your
Floyd | Explorer Scout compass it's more useful to use landmarks to navigate
Floyd | anyway.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 45
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | You are concentrating so hard on your full pail, your hands start to
Floyd | shake and a ripe berry tumbles off into the dirt.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lost in the Brambles
Floyd | This spot, a little ways from where Honey and Grandpa are picking, has
Floyd | some good berries. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Why Can't We Be Friends", begins playing on the nearby
Floyd | radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "yeah, no compass directions without a compass."
Zach says, "Lazy kids"
Zach says (to Floyd), "pour pail into bucket"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 45
Floyd | >
Floyd | > POUR PAIL INTO BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "down"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  46
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DOWN
Floyd |
Floyd | You have to stop for a minute to catch your breath and steady your
Floyd | hands holding your full pail.
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | You are near the creek, but it can't be seen through the blackberry
Floyd | brambles. This is a pleasant clearing carpeted with stubbly grass
Floyd | under a sycamore tree. There are paths and clearings beaten down among
Floyd | the brambles that allow you to squeeze in to get the ripest berries.
Floyd | There is a big bucket in the middle of the clearing. Grandpa's shirt
Floyd | and Honey's portable transistor radio are on the bank under the tree
Floyd | playing music.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the path and down the creek, there's a tangle of blackberry
Floyd | bushes. Up the hill is the blackberry brambles where you've been
Floyd | picking for a while.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are here picking berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "down, I think"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pour pail into bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  47
Floyd | >
Floyd | > POUR PAIL INTO BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You empty the bunch of ripe berries from the pail into the big bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "ah, you found it"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  48
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a big bucket that Honey and Grandpa have been putting their
Floyd | berries into, about a quarter full.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Grump. Only a quarter full."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x river"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  48
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RIVER
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about berries"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  49
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | "How you doing, Tootsie Roll?" Grandpa ruffles your hair. "You helping
Floyd | your Honey and grandpa make blackberry jam?"
Floyd |
Floyd | After a DJ break, Honey's radio's playing "Wildfire" by you're not
Floyd | really sure, a song you really like.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We don't have to have it full full, but maybe a bit more. I'm not sure."
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about child labor"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  50
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT CHILD LABOR
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hm, good question, Peanut," Grandpa shrugs.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Ha"
genericgeekgirl says, "Hahaha"
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 51
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Lost in the Brambles
Floyd | This spot, a little ways from where Honey and Grandpa are picking, has
Floyd | some good berries. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 52
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You stretch and manage to pick a few ripe blackberries. You drop the
Floyd | berries into your pail.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 53
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You gather up the easy ones right in front until you have a handful of
Floyd | ripe blackberries. You drop the berries into your pail which is about
Floyd | half full.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear the nearby radio playing a new song: "Please Mr Postman".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 54
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | By working on tiptoes, you are just able to pick a few  ripe
Floyd | blackberries. You drop the berries into the pail which is getting
Floyd | close to full.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take berries"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 55
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BERRIES
Floyd |
Floyd | You notice some ripe ones down near your knees and grab a bunch of
Floyd | ripe blackberries. You carefully put these blackberries in the pail
Floyd | which is now heaping. That should be enough to satisfy Honey.
Floyd |
Floyd | Even though you love picking blackberries -- and you certainly love
Floyd | blackberry jam, blackberry pie, blackberry and cream, or just eating
Floyd | fresh blackberries -- you've been picking berries all morning. You
Floyd | must have picked a million pails already. And you want to see
Floyd | if the red ants ate the dead cricket you put near their hole. Oh, and
Floyd | you want to see if you can find a lucky penny. And you may even wanna
Floyd | swim.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | You should probably dump the berries in Honey and Grandpa's bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "You can try going down twice from the bucket again, I guess, to see if we're free to explore."
genericgeekgirl says, "There's a soundtrack on the website: modes.io/playing-bear-creek/"
Zach says, "Neat"
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  56
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | You walk slow steading your pail full of blackberries.
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | You are near the creek, but it can't be seen through the blackberry
Floyd | brambles. This is a pleasant clearing carpeted with stubbly grass
Floyd | under a sycamore tree. There are paths and clearings beaten down among
Floyd | the brambles that allow you to squeeze in to get the ripest berries.
Floyd | There is a big bucket in the middle of the clearing. Grandpa's shirt
Floyd | and Honey's portable transistor radio are on the bank under the tree
Floyd | playing music.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the path and down the creek, there's a tangle of blackberry
Floyd | bushes. Up the hill is the blackberry brambles where you've been
Floyd | picking for a while.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are here picking berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "pour pail into bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  57
Floyd | >
Floyd | > POUR PAIL INTO BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You empty the bunch of ripe berries from the pail into the big bucket.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | After a DJ break, Honey's radio's playing "Feelings".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    58
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey looks up and says, "Have fun, but don't wander too far."
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Tangle
Floyd | There are paths through the brambles, a maze with tantalizing fruit.
Floyd | Although this area is mostly picked since you and Honey and Grandpa
Floyd | came this way when you started picking this morning. You can still
Floyd | find some ripe berries though.
Floyd |
Floyd | Through the blackberry tangle, there's a trail going down along the
Floyd | creek shaded by lush green willow trees. Back the way you came is the
Floyd | clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "ah, we can go find the dog, I think."
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Trail
Floyd | This is a trail running roughly parallel the creek with tall
Floyd | blackberry brambles on either side. In one place, there are Willows
Floyd | hanging down over the trail that tickle the back of your neck as you
Floyd | duck under them.
Floyd |
Floyd | It looks like the trail used to continue further on down the creek on
Floyd | this side, but is now hidden by underbrush -- though you could try to
Floyd | follow the lost trail. Farther on down the creek, the trail turns to
Floyd | cross an overgrown stone bridge. In the other direction, up the path,
Floyd | is the tangle of blackberry bushes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x underbrush"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X UNDERBRUSH
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x lost trail"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LOST TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bridge"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "You can say 'trail' to follow the trail or 'bridge' to go to the bridge."
Zach asks, "Any preference?"
genericgeekgirl asks, "Trail?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "trail"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Gerynar says, "the winning direction"
DavidW says, "I don't remember if i checked the trail."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "go trail"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     59
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd | You're not sure exactly how to get there. You take a quick look around
Floyd | you: It looks like the trail used to continue further on down the
Floyd | creek on this side, but is now hidden by underbrush -- though you
Floyd | could try to follow the lost trail. Farther on down the creek, the
Floyd | trail turns to cross an overgrown stone bridge. In the other
Floyd | direction, up the path, is the tangle of blackberry bushes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "go lost trail"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     60
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOST TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd | You follow the trail on this side of the creek until it is lost, then
Floyd | bushwhack for a little bit, before returning discouraged. Perhaps it
Floyd | is a trail, but there are definitely easier ways to go for now. Still
Floyd | you wonder where it goes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         61
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd | You glance one more time at the old overgrown creek trail before
Floyd | crossing the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge
Floyd | The trail crosses an old stone bridge -- an excellent place to sit on
Floyd | a sunny day -- from which you can look down into Bear Creek. Movement
Floyd | in the sparkling water and the old mossy bridge catch your eye. You
Floyd | follow water skeeters darting about.
Floyd |
Floyd | On one side of the bridge, the path turns out into a dirt road that
Floyd | runs down along the creek. On the other side, the blackberry trail
Floyd | goes up the creek back toward the berry picking spot. You can also get
Floyd | in the creek or go to a grassy bank from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | On a distant radio, a new song begins: "Feel Like Makin" Love".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "hm."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x movement"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         61
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MOVEMENT
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x skeeters"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         62
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SKEETERS
Floyd |
Floyd | In places, the creek seems like just a trickle, then other places it
Floyd | is as wide as a river. Here, it is broad and shallow as it goes under
Floyd | the bridge. There are bright stars twinkling on the water with pebbles
Floyd | and tiny minnows below. It smells like wet rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | A branch floats by, catching for a moment on the bottom, and then
Floyd | continues on.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I guess I misremembered and it's 'go [location]' not just '[location]'."
genericgeekgirl asks, "Into the creek?"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "cf25"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         62
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "enter creek"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         63
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | The water is too shallow to swim, so you roll up your pant legs and
Floyd | wade in, soaking your tennies. Uh oh, will you get in trouble for
Floyd | that? But the water is chill and refreshing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         62
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "remove shoes"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         63
Floyd | >
Floyd | > REMOVE SHOES
Floyd |
Floyd | Better keep those on for now.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Darn."
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         64
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge
Floyd | The road may have crossed the creek over an old stone bridge at one
Floyd | time but is now just a narrow trail. From here you can peer down into
Floyd | Bear Creek. Movement in the sparkling water and the old mossy bridge
Floyd | catch your eye. You catch a glimmering flash in the depths near a
Floyd | boulder.
Floyd |
Floyd | On one side of the bridge, the path turns out into a dirt road that
Floyd | runs down along the creek. On the other side, the blackberry trail
Floyd | goes up the creek back toward the berry picking spot. You can also get
Floyd | in the creek or go to a grassy bank from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Interesting. I didn't try going directly into the creek."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x flash"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         65
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FLASH
Floyd |
Floyd | In places, the creek seems like just a trickle, then other places it
Floyd | is as wide as a river. Here, it is broad and shallow as it goes under
Floyd | the bridge. There are bright stars twinkling on the water with pebbles
Floyd | and tiny minnows below. It smells like wet rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | You watch two leaves swirl by on the current.
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Black Water", begins playing on a faint radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Bet the flash is a lost penny like we wanted."
DavidW says (to Floyd), "look in creek"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         66
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LOOK IN CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | In places, the creek seems like just a trickle, then other places it
Floyd | is as wide as a river. Here, it is broad and shallow as it goes under
Floyd | the bridge. There are bright stars twinkling on the water with pebbles
Floyd | and tiny minnows below. It smells like wet rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | Little minnows are swimming about in the shallows.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "search creek"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         67
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SEARCH CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | In places, the creek seems like just a trickle, then other places it
Floyd | is as wide as a river. Here, it is broad and shallow as it goes under
Floyd | the bridge. There are bright stars twinkling on the water with pebbles
Floyd | and tiny minnows below. It smells like wet rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | You follow water skeeters darting about.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take flash"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         68
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE FLASH
Floyd |
Floyd | You reach for them, but they drift on down the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bridge"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         69
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd | The trail goes over the old bridge that was probably part of some old
Floyd | road. The stones of the old bridge are covered with moss. Horsetails
Floyd | and ferns are growing at the shady base of the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | On a distant radio, a new song begins: "Sister Golden Hair".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "hm. I guess I was wrong."
DavidW says (to Floyd), "pick horsetail"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         70
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PICK HORSETAIL
Floyd |
Floyd | Silly, you can't pick that.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bank"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         71
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BANK
Floyd |
Floyd | You see nothing special about the grassy bank.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter bank"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         72
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER BANK
Floyd |
Floyd | You get onto the grassy bank.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         73
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge (on the grassy bank)
Floyd | The road may have crossed the creek over an old stone bridge at one
Floyd | time but is now just a narrow trail. From here you can peer down into
Floyd | Bear Creek. Movement in the sparkling water and the old mossy bridge
Floyd | catch your eye. Little minnows are swimming about in the shallows.
Floyd |
Floyd | On one side of the bridge, the path turns out into a dirt road that
Floyd | runs down along the creek. On the other side, the blackberry trail
Floyd | goes up the creek back toward the berry picking spot. You can also get
Floyd | in the creek or go to a grassy bank from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a far-away radio playing a new song: "Another Somebody Done
Floyd | Somebody Wrong Song," a good one.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach asks, "Go to the road?"
genericgeekgirl says, "Ok"
DavidW says, "sure"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go road"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            74
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO ROAD
Floyd |
Floyd | (first getting off the grassy bank)
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | The trail over the stone bridge turns into a dirt road here which
Floyd | slopes gently upward running along the creek.. The old creekside road
Floyd | is seldom used now and in poor condition with deep ruts and sandy
Floyd | areas. Nowadays it is only used by people walking down to Bear Creek
Floyd | from the highway, fishermen and berry pickers mostly. Here, someone's
Floyd | field backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link fence. The
Floyd | field is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The old dirt road continues on uphill for a long stretch running
Floyd | parallel to the creek downstream. Back toward the old stone bridge,
Floyd | the road narrows to a ragged trail as it crosses the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a dog behind the fence, alternately digging and barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | This dog makes you suddenly queasy, though you couldn't have known
Floyd | then what part it would play in what happened.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Eek."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "kill dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            75
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KILL DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You're pretty scared of this furiously barking animal, and don't want
Floyd | to get too close.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is trying to dig underneath the fence. It's doing pretty good
Floyd | with its escape attempt already. When it sees you, it barks furiously
Floyd | and launches itself against the chain link.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "The foreboding is *too* good, for my liking."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            76
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Kind of a yellowish medium dog with pointy ears. You don't know what
Floyd | kind. It's not a german shepherd or a doberman but it looks mean like
Floyd | that. Some kind of guard dog maybe. It reminds you of Uncle Buddy's
Floyd | dog that mom was taking care of and how when you tried to feed it and
Floyd | get the spoon, it bit you.
Floyd |
Floyd | It makes you queasy. But there's something about this dog.
Floyd |
Floyd | Is that grandpa calling you?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "give berries to dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            76
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE BERRIES TO DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            77
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a pail. Looking carefully, you can see marks on your
Floyd | arm where your step-dad grabbed you, and it's still a little tender.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "give pail to dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            78
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE PAIL TO DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog perks up its ears as you approach. The dog extends its nose
Floyd | cautiously to sniff the pail and wanders away disinterested.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is alternately digging and barking up a storm.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl asks, "Go find grandpa?"
genericgeekgirl says, "Or make him come to us? (If he would)"
DavidW says, "I think we should return to grandpa. Perhaps seeing the dog is a trigger."
Zach asks, "Can we keep going?"
DavidW says, "I dunno. I thought the fence blocked us."
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         79
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Gerynar has had his fill of playing for now, and goes back to the Lounge. Zach says, "Hmm"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x tree"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         80
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a hugely tall pine tree here. Grandpa said it was called Doug
Floyd | Fir (not fur like a dog, but fir, which is a kind of pine tree). The
Floyd | tree is on the uphill side of the road below a low bluff. The branches
Floyd | are almost low enough to climb which you've done a couple of times but
Floyd | never all the way to the top.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "climb tree"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         81
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | You jump to reach the lowest branch and hang there struggling for a
Floyd | few moments before dropping back to the ground frustrated.
Floyd |
Floyd | You know you've climbed this tree before and you were
Floyd | probably smaller then too. Maybe you should try again?
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard somewhere down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb tree"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         82
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB TREE
Floyd |
Zach says (to Floyd), "climb tree"
Floyd | This time, you get a leg up and hang there like a monkey, but can't
Floyd | quite get up on the lowest branch. You drop down when your arms start
Floyd | shaking.
Floyd |
Floyd | You pretty sure you've climbed this tree before. Was it this one?
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard somewhere down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           83
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | Using the rise on the uphill side of the tree, you are able to get a
Floyd | hold of a branch and swing your leg over, dangling precariously for a
Floyd | few moments, before pulling yourself upright. After that, the tree is
Floyd | pretty easy to climb. Although you've now got sap all over your hands.
Floyd |
Floyd | Halfway Up
Floyd | You're about halfway up the tree, really pretty high. The branches
Floyd | definitely get thinner higher up. But here the branches are about as
Floyd | big around as your leg and you are sitting on a particularly sturdy
Floyd | one. In fact, you're feeling pretty comfortable up here. You make a
Floyd | monkey yell to tell the other monkeys you are now the ruler of the
Floyd | forest.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around, it's hard to see much of anything, although you can
Floyd | see the dog still trying to tunnel under the fence through the thick
Floyd | branches. It looks like the view is much better higher up.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb"
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           84
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB
Floyd |
Floyd | Should you go any higher? You notice that the branches definitely thin
Floyd | out near the top of the tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "cf26"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           84
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "YES."
Zach exclaims, "ook!"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb"
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           85
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB
Floyd |
Floyd | You work your way higher into the pine tree, the branches are thinner
Floyd | but still seem pretty stable and--
Floyd |
Floyd | SNAP!
Floyd |
Floyd | --down you go!
Floyd |
Floyd | Miraculously, you catch yourself going down! But not before clobbering
Floyd | yourself in the ribs pretty hard. It knocks the wind out of you and
Floyd | for a few minutes, you can't even say "Ow." You've fallen back to
Floyd | where you were a second ago. Do you dare try again?
Floyd |
Floyd | Halfway Up
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 86
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB
Floyd |
Floyd | This time you work your way around to the sunny side of the tree where
Floyd | the branches are a little bit thicker. You test each branch a little
Floyd | and keep a hold of another branch before committing your weight. In
Floyd | this way, you slowly make your way up to the top.
Floyd |
Floyd | Top of the Pine Tree
Floyd | This is very close to the very top. You are holding on to the narrow
Floyd | trunk of the tree. You can feel it sway in the faint breeze. It is
Floyd | slightly cooler up here. Looking around, you can see the whole
Floyd | world.
Floyd |
Floyd | In the distance, you can see the mountains, brown and green, edged
Floyd | with trees all the way around, and not just Bear Creek below you, but
Floyd | the river a ways over there. And out that way is town, barely visible
Floyd | through trees.  And the forest stretching out endlessly in every
Floyd | direction.
Floyd |
Floyd | The railroad tracks which wind gently from one direction pass almost
Floyd | beneath you and disappear in gentle S-curves in the other direction.
Floyd | You can see the trailer park and that might be Honey and Grandpa's
Floyd | trailer. Everything looks so small, like looking at an ant hill. A
Floyd | giddy feeling pushes up out of you, and you can't stop laughing.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "laugh"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 87
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LAUGH
Floyd |
Floyd | You chuckle heartily.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "jump"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 88
Floyd | >
Floyd | > JUMP
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking down, you get a sudden crazy urge to leap into space. You
Floyd | resist the urge.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "cry"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 88
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CRY
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "sing"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 89
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SING
Floyd |
Floyd | You sing a little bit of one of your favorite songs, "Kung Fu
Floyd | Fighting", but you only know the chorus.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "climb"
Floyd ]  Top of the Pine Tree                                 90
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't go that way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           91
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | You carefully work your way down from the top, avoiding the thinner
Floyd | branches.
Floyd |
Floyd | Halfway Up
Floyd | You're about halfway up the tree, really pretty high. The branches
Floyd | definitely get thinner higher up. But here the branches are about as
Floyd | big around as your leg and you are sitting on a particularly sturdy
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around, it's hard to see much of anything, although you can
Floyd | see the dog still trying to tunnel under the fence through the thick
Floyd | branches. It looks like the view is much better higher up.
Floyd |
Floyd | Is that grandpa calling you?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x dog"
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           91
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         92
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | You work your way down the tree, dropping the last few feet to the
Floyd | ground.
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go hole"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         92
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | You're not sure exactly how to get there. You take a quick look around
Floyd | you: At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging
Floyd | down the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes
Floyd | on for a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         92
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | That noun did not make sense in this context.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        93
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the oppressive heat, the cool shade is a welcome
Floyd | relief.
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | Down a long wooded trail that zigs down the bank, you emerge from the
Floyd | thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The swimming hole lies
Floyd | before you, a deep pool carved out of and surrounded by smooth granite
Floyd | rocks. It is big enough that you can swim like they taught you at the
Floyd | YWCA from one end to the other, and deep enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x pool"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        94
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X POOL
Floyd |
Floyd | The creek tumbles down some big granite rocks here and forms a deep
Floyd | pool. You can't see the bottom. And that makes you anxious.
Floyd |
Floyd | Is that grandpa calling you?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x log"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "cf27"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        95
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        95
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "swim"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        96
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SWIM
Floyd |
Floyd | Hmm, are you sure? You don't have a bathing suit, so you'd have to
Floyd | strip down to your undies.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "strip"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        96
Floyd | >
Floyd | > STRIP
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "remove clothes"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        97
Floyd | >
Floyd | > REMOVE CLOTHES
Floyd |
Floyd | You look around again to see if you are alone. The path from the dirt
Floyd | road is deep forest and there is no one else at the swimming hole. So
Floyd | you carefully strip down to your skivvies, folding your clothes on the
Floyd | rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "swim"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        98
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SWIM
Floyd |
Floyd | You stand at the edge of the rocks curling your toes over the edge.
Floyd | You hesitate before jumping in. At the count of three. One. Two.
Floyd |
Floyd | Two and a half.
Floyd |
Floyd |  Two and three quarters.
Floyd |
Floyd | THREE!
Floyd |
Floyd | You jump in feet first and plummet straight down, the world of air and
Floyd | trees and clouds receding far above. You go down down down letting
Floyd | yourself fall slowly until you feel a jolt as your feet bump the rocks
Floyd | at the bottom of the pool.
Floyd |
Floyd | In the moment before you run out of air, you look up at an enchanted
Floyd | underwater world. Fingers of sunlight flicker through the green
Floyd | twilight. Even the very water around you shimmers before your eyes.
Floyd |
Floyd | You push off the bottom and return to the surface with a gasp of
Floyd | delicious air and climb back up on the rocks. You feel courageous.
Floyd | When you get out of the water, you dry quickly in the warm air.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "That should at least get the tree sap off our hands."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "wear clothing"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        99
Floyd | >
Floyd | > WEAR CLOTHING
Floyd |
Floyd | You put on your clothes.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Poor Grandpa can't find his Tootsie Roll."
genericgeekgirl says, "Awww."
Zach says (to Floyd), "get on log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        100
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET ON LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You'd probably fall in the water immediately.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on this side of the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        101
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        102
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Too heavy.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        103
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't go that way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        104
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | You emerge from the thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The
Floyd | swimming hole lies before you, a deep pool carved out of and
Floyd | surrounded by smooth granite rocks. It is big enough that you can swim
Floyd | like they taught you at the YWCA from one end to the other, and deep
Floyd | enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see your tennis shoes, some pine sap, a pail, and a deep
Floyd | pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put on shoes"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        105
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT ON SHOES
Floyd |
Floyd | You put on your tennis shoes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Finally, your underwear is drying out.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take all"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        106
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ALL
Floyd |
Floyd | pine sap: Try as you might, you can't get if off your hands easily.
Floyd | pail: Taken.
Floyd | floating length of log: Too heavy.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "ha, I guess we dropped the sap."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x sap"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        107
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SAP
Floyd |
Floyd | Your hands are spotted with sticky pine sap.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        108
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | You emerge from the thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The
Floyd | swimming hole lies before you, a deep pool carved out of and
Floyd | surrounded by smooth granite rocks. It is big enough that you can swim
Floyd | like they taught you at the YWCA from one end to the other, and deep
Floyd | enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see some pine sap and a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "a sap bug"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go rocky shore"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        109
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO ROCKY SHORE
Floyd |
Floyd | Uh, that seems unlikely.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go downstream"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             110
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO DOWNSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd | You slowly gather your stuff.
Floyd |
Floyd | You carefully navigate the rocky bank, making your way downstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | Here the creek broadens out a little and, except for a place in the
Floyd | middle where the current is swift, there are big stones, boulders
Floyd | really, scattered about in the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | The shoreline ends at a steep bank further downstream, though it looks
Floyd | like you might be able to cross the creek on the boulders in
Floyd | midstream. You can also go back along the rocks upstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | Something about the crossing makes you nervous like watching a
Floyd | glass fall off of a countertop in slow motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Cross cross!"
Zach says (to Floyd), "cross"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             111
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CROSS
Floyd |
Floyd | The current here is too strong and it scares you. You saw a TV show
Floyd | once with your grandpa about people in rafts and one man who fell off
Floyd | and got caught under a rock and drowned. You think better of the idea.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x boulders"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             112
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BOULDERS
Floyd |
Floyd | There are scattered boulders in the creek bed on which you might be
Floyd | able to cross.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "cross creek"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             113
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CROSS CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | The current here is too strong and it scares you. You saw a TV show
Floyd | once with your grandpa about people in rafts and one man who fell off
Floyd | and got caught under a rock and drowned. You think better of the idea.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Hmmph"
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             114
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't go that way.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go upstream"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        115
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO UPSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | You emerge from the thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The
Floyd | swimming hole lies before you, a deep pool carved out of and
Floyd | surrounded by smooth granite rocks. It is big enough that you can swim
Floyd | like they taught you at the YWCA from one end to the other, and deep
Floyd | enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         116
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the shaded trail, the heat is like a physical force
Floyd | that pushes against you.
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I guess it's not serious until <em>Honey</em> calls us."
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Halfway Up                                           117
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | Using the rise on the uphill side of the tree, you are able to get a
Floyd | hold of a branch and swing your leg over, dangling precariously for a
Floyd | few moments, before pulling yourself upright. After that, the tree is
Floyd | pretty easy to climb.
Floyd |
Floyd | Halfway Up
Floyd | You're about halfway up the tree, really pretty high. The branches
Floyd | definitely get thinner higher up. But here the branches are about as
Floyd | big around as your leg and you are sitting on a particularly sturdy
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around, it's hard to see much of anything, although you can
Floyd | see the dog still trying to tunnel under the fence through the thick
Floyd | branches. It looks like the view is much better higher up.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         118
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | You work your way down the tree, dropping the last few feet to the
Floyd | ground.
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | Is that grandpa calling you?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go railroad tracks"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              119
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO RAILROAD TRACKS
Floyd |
Floyd | You glance down at the trail to the swimming hole as you walk along
Floyd | the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific." Your grandpa sometimes
Floyd | takes you down here to watch the train go by. He taught you the name
Floyd | of all the cars and used to work on the railroad.
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | Hey, there's the penny you lost when you came here with Grandpa to
Floyd | make train pennies!
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take penny"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              120
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE PENNY
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x pennny"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              120
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X PENNNY
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x penny"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              121
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X PENNY
Floyd |
Floyd | Ah, this is a wheat penny. Its tiny numbers say 1956.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Yay, penny."
Zach says, "Fancy"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x rock"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              122
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ROCK
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa called these ballast, rocks that line the railroad tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | That sounds like Grandpa calling you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take rock"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              123
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ROCK
Floyd |
Floyd | You pick up one of the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "> throw rock at dog? :("
Zach says, "Only if it gets evil"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x tracks"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              124
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TRACKS
Floyd |
Floyd | The steel rails are shiny on top and rusty on the sides. the wooden
Floyd | ties are supported by a mound of dark gray rock.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go trailer park"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          125
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO TRAILER PARK
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Red ants
Floyd | are your sworn enemies. They're the ones who started the war, not you.
Floyd | A bunch of them ganged up and bit you, and all you were doing was
Floyd | trying to put them in a bottle for your ant colony. There is a drop of
Floyd | something on the pavement that the ants are very interested in.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x drop"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          126
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DROP
Floyd |
Floyd | You see nothing special about the drop of something on the pavement.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "The ants do, clearly."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          127
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | The ants wander about purposefully, though you can't tell exactly what
Floyd | they are up to. Near the trees, a bunch of big red ants are eating the
Floyd | remains of a huge Jerusalem cricket. Gross.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x cricket"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          128
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CRICKET
Floyd |
Floyd | This huge translucent brown bug is totally gross when it is alive, so
Floyd | now that it is half smashed, half decayed and swarming with red ants,
Floyd | it is indescribably disgusting. You are totally fascinated.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take cricket"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          129
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE CRICKET
Floyd |
Floyd | That's hardly portable.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          130
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | They're hardly portable.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          131
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a rock, a penny, and a pail. And your hands are
Floyd | spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and your arm hurts a
Floyd | little. You are going to get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "They're huuuge ants"
Zach says, "Aww"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x ant hill"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          132
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ANT HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | This ant hill rises up higher than the top of your sneakers. Some of
Floyd | the red ants are scouting about individually.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "kick ant hill"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               133
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KICK ANT HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | You crush a few of the nearby ants with your foot. Take that!
Floyd |
Floyd | The red ants are running everywhere.
Floyd |
Floyd | You get a lurching feeling as a police car pulls slowly through the
Floyd | trailer park. You are pulled along in its wake by curiosity. The
Floyd | police car stops in D Loop and so do you.
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd |
Floyd | The Sheriff's car -- you realize it's the Sheriff since it says so
Floyd | right on the door -- stops in front of the Cat Lady's trailer. You
Floyd | take a step back.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               134
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Sheriff leans out the window toward the Cat Lady: "How you doing
Floyd | Sharon? Things okay around here?" The Sheriff flicks his eyes over at
Floyd | you, and you will yourself to be invisible.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach exclaims, "Uh, the ants started it!"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               135
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well, pretty good, Bill. I can't complain," the Cat Lady tells the
Floyd | Sheriff. Then a frown crosses her face, "Oh except Oliver has an
Floyd | abscess. I have to take him to the kitty doctor next week."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell sheriff about arm"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               136
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL SHERIFF ABOUT ARM
Floyd |
Floyd | The Sheriff looks your way, but seems to ignore what you said.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               137
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well what I came to ask," the Sheriff says to the Cat Lady, "Has he
Floyd | been bothering you any?" He looks back toward C Loop. "When I drove
Floyd | up, I saw him over there. Has he been leaving you alone?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               138
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, he hasn't so much as looked in my direction," the Cat Lady says
Floyd | to the Sheriff.
Floyd |
Floyd | "That's good," the Sheriff says. "I just wanted to check in with you.
Floyd | Will you tell me if you have more problems?""
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               139
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Dearie, you're a sweet man to check in on me," the Cat Lady puts her
Floyd | hand on the Sheriff's arm and he almost smiles.
Floyd |
Floyd | He pats her hand, "You take care of yourself Sharon, and make sure you
Floyd | call me if you have any problems." He talks briefly on his radio and
Floyd | then drives off, a little too fast for inside the trailer park. The
Floyd | Cat Lady unwinds the hose and continues watering her garden.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x lady"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               140
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LADY
Floyd |
Floyd | She has a name, but you never can remember it, especially since both
Floyd | your mom and Honey call her the crazy cat lady behind her back. Is it
Floyd | Sharon? Shannon? And that's not all they call her. Honey says she is a
Floyd | crazy old B-I-T-C-H. But she's always been nice to you. Her makeup is
Floyd | a little bit too thick and she seems to wear a bathrobe at all hours,
Floyd | but you can see how she used to be pretty when she was young.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, hello, dearie," the Cat Lady says, "So good to see you. Out for
Floyd | an adventure today?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "yes"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               141
Floyd | >
Floyd | > YES
Floyd |
Floyd | "Alright, good," the Cat Lady nods.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               140
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               141
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh?" the Cat Lady frowns.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Haha"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "yes"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               142
Floyd | >
Floyd | > YES
Floyd |
Floyd | "Alright, good," the Cat Lady nods.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lady about man"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               143
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well, I don't know, dear," the Cat Lady says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell cat lady about dog"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               144
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL CAT LADY ABOUT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Oh dogs, they absolutely terrorize my babies. Just the other day,
Floyd | several of my kitties had to defend their very lives from a ferocious
Floyd | doggy that someone brought in to the park on a leash. It served that
Floyd | bad dog right and he had to be taken to the vet.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl asks, "Ma'am, can I borrow your cats?"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lady about cats"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               145
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT CATS
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh my babies," the Cat Lady says, clasping her hands to her chest,
Floyd | "Joseph and I couldn't have children, but I always had a kitty. Then
Floyd | after Joseph was gone, I found a tiny scrawny yellow tabby kitten
Floyd | starving and mewling at my door one afternoon."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               146
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady is still going on.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I fed this little tabby cat and loved him. For a while, I didn't
Floyd | think he'd make it, but now he's my best friend in the whole world,"
Floyd | the Cat Lady says ruffling the head of the yellow tabby.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl) crazy cat lady says, "And now I have 300."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x tabby"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               147
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TABBY
Floyd |
Floyd | He is striped yellow and white like a tiger. A small one.
Floyd |
Floyd | "A few years ago, I found a one-eyed mama cat heavy with kittens
Floyd | living under my porch. She wouldn't let me get near her at first," a
Floyd | frown crosses her face, "Actually, she still won't let me touch her,
Floyd | but she had a whole litter of beautiful kittens, that I've fed and
Floyd | taken care of."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               148
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady looks at some of the cats running around, "I'm not sure
Floyd | where some of these darling kitties came from, but I love them, every
Floyd | one."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               149
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Won't you come in for a moment?" the Cat Lady gestures at her
Floyd | trailer, "I just love guests. And I do so enjoy talking to you."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   150
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Cat Lady's Trailer
Floyd | The first thing you notice is the smell of cat pee and rotten fish.
Floyd | Rose-tinted light comes slanting through the dingy ruffled curtains.
Floyd | The Cat Lady's Trailer is full of lace doilies, porcelain figurines,
Floyd | and most of all cats -- sitting, lying, prowling, and meowing. The
Floyd | little figures catch your eye.
Floyd |
Floyd | There are cats everywhere. The trailer is filled with cats of every
Floyd | size, color, and condition, many still pretty wild. Cats recline,
Floyd | stroll, and argue on every chair, couch, and table in her house.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "The cats are going to eat us."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x figures"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   151
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FIGURES
Floyd |
Floyd | The house is full of this stuff. Especially little porcelain figurines
Floyd | of cats. On little shelves, in glass cabinets, everywhere. You notice
Floyd | one that looks exactly like Mika.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Eeek"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x mika"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   152
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MIKA
Floyd |
Floyd | It looks just like your cat Mika. It's white and black with all the
Floyd | spots in the right place. It even has Mika's one droopy ear.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady comes into the trailer and sees you, "Hi, sweetheart."
Floyd | The tabby cat follows through the cat door.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, how I love visitors. And you are such a dear heart," the Cat Lady
Floyd | says, looking at you in a way that makes you nervous. "I know! I know!
Floyd | Tea time! Let's have a little tea party." She clasps her hands to her
Floyd | chest.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "yes"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   153
Floyd | >
Floyd | > YES
Floyd |
Floyd | You need to specify who you want to speak to.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, honey, won't you sit down?" the Cat Lady says, pointing at the
Floyd | half-buried kitchen table. "I'll get the tea ready." She bustles
Floyd | around at the sink, in her cupboards, and with the tea things.
Floyd |
Floyd | A sudden thought: What if you are here talking to the Cat Lady and
Floyd | something happens to your Grandpa or Honey? Or worse, your mom? You
Floyd | struggle to think about something else.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I just hope we're not doing too many things out of the expected order."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "sit"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   154
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SIT
Floyd |
Floyd | Where do you want to sit? There's a few choices: what was formerly a
Floyd | loveseat and Cat Lady's kitchen table.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Please, dearie, sit down." The Cat Lady fills the teapot from a
Floyd | kettle that she didn't bother to heat.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I love a tea party, don't you?" the Cat Lady asks, but leaves you no
Floyd | time to answer. "Tell me about your life, dear. What adventures have
Floyd | you had since we talked last?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "sit on table"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   155
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SIT ON TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd | You make yourself comfortable at the Cat Lady's kitchen table.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear the morning train blowing its whistle way off in
Floyd | the hills.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady fills your cup and her own from the teapot. "I'm terribly
Floyd | sorry, sweetheart, I don't have tea biscuits. I'm out right now," she
Floyd | looks accusingly at a particularly fat cat lying on a chair. "Sam got
Floyd | into the cupboard and ate every last one." You wonder that the cat can
Floyd | jump up on anything, let alone get into the cupboard.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "tell lady about adventure"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   156
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL LADY ABOUT ADVENTURE
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh yes, dearie, I can see it now!" the Cat Lady says.
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "tell lady about arm"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   157
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL LADY ABOUT ARM
Floyd |
Floyd | "How delightful!" the Cat Lady says as she gently removes a kitten
Floyd | trying to climb her like a tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Delightful."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x sam"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   158
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SAM
Floyd |
Floyd | There are cats everywhere. The trailer is filled with cats of every
Floyd | size, color, and condition, many still pretty wild. Cats recline,
Floyd | stroll, and argue on every chair, couch, and table in her house.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Is your grandmother still mad at me?" the Cat Lady asks."She's been
Floyd | angry at me for years. Ever since I spoke up about her and Joseph's
Floyd | friendship." The Cat Lady is lost in thought.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about joseph"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   159
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT JOSEPH
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady looks wistful for a moment, "When my Joseph was alive..."
Floyd | and she just kind of drifts off and doesn't finish.
Floyd |
Floyd | One of a pile of kittens lazing in the sun falls off the ottoman.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take kitten"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   160
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE KITTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady's cats are nearly feral. That's a good way to lose an eye
Floyd | or a finger.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a train whistle in the distance.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady looks serious. "Are things going okay with your new
Floyd | step-dad? Is that going okay?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   161
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh?" the Cat Lady frowns.
Floyd |
Floyd | A yellow kitten brushes up against your leg, but then darts off when
Floyd | you bend to pet it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "give berry to lady"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   161
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE BERRY TO LADY
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "show arm to lady"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   162
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHOW ARM TO LADY
Floyd |
Floyd | That seems to be a part of yourself.
Floyd |
Floyd | What is the news with your Aunt Mary?" the Cat Lady asks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "shrug"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   162
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHRUG
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about sheriff"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   163
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT SHERIFF
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, Bill's a nice man. He checks on me at least once a week," the Cat
Floyd | Lady says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "tell lady about nick"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   164
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL LADY ABOUT NICK
Floyd |
Floyd | "I didn't know your dad, honey, but I heard he was a very charming
Floyd | man," the Cat Lady says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about rachel"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   165
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your mom, sweetheart, you better treat her like an angel, because she
Floyd | is. You know she came and brought me soup when I had pneumonia? And
Floyd | went to the store and got me medicines.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear the morning train whistle, loud and close, as it hits the
Floyd | crossing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about honey"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   166
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT HONEY
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady looks a little uncomfortable, "Your grandmother is very
Floyd | beautiful," she says after a moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lady about grandpa"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   167
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | "Your grandfather is such a nice man," the Cat Lady says. "Just the
Floyd | other day, he helped me get Zoey out of the neighbor's tree."
Floyd |
Floyd | A stripey gray tomcat takes a growling swipe at a fluffy
Floyd | tortoise-shell.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lady about me"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   168
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT ME
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well honey, you are the sweetest child and my very favorite
Floyd | neighbor," the Cat Lady says patting you on the head affectionately.
Floyd |
Floyd | The tabby grooms itself carefully.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about honey"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   169
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT HONEY
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady looks a little uncomfortable, "Your grandmother is very
Floyd | beautiful," she says after a moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dirty white cat bats at a housefly.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pet cat"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   170
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PET CAT
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady's cats are nearly feral. That's a good way to lose an eye
Floyd | or a finger.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady gestures at your cup, "Do you like your tea?" she asks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "drink tea"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   171
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DRINK TEA
Floyd |
Floyd | You bring the tiny teacup to your lips and drain it in a sip or two.
Floyd | The tea is lukewarm and watery, but okay.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady re-fills both of your cups with more tepid tea.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady leans toward you. "Tell me about your explorations. What
Floyd | about the train tracks?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "throw rock at cat"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   172
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW ROCK AT CAT
Floyd |
Floyd | That seems like a really terrible idea. You think better of it.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Is your grandmother still mad at me?" the Cat Lady asks."She's been
Floyd | angry at me for years. Ever since I spoke up about her and Joseph's
Floyd | friendship." The Cat Lady is lost in thought.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   173
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh?" the Cat Lady frowns.
Floyd |
Floyd | The yellow tabby scratches its ear.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "leave"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   174
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LEAVE
Floyd |
Floyd | You get off the Cat Lady's kitchen table.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh dear, it's been so nice talking to you. I can see you have to go,"
Floyd | the Cat Lady hugs you and pinches your cheek gently which makes you
Floyd | squirm. "You are growing so big. And so... such a lovely child," she
Floyd | says looking you up and down, embarrassing you.
Floyd |
Floyd | You return your teacup to the table.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "I bet our grandparents are dead now."
Zach cries
Zach says, "And the tea sucked"
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Cat Lady's Trailer                                   175
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Cat Lady's Trailer
Floyd | You are starting to get used to the smell. Rose-tinted light comes
Floyd | slanting through the dingy ruffled curtains. The Cat Lady's Trailer is
Floyd | full of lace doilies, porcelain figurines, and most of all cats --
Floyd | sitting, lying, prowling, and meowing. The little figures catch your
Floyd | eye.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady is here. She is staring briefly into space, and that
Floyd | makes you a little uncomfortable. She's always been nice to you, even
Floyd | if your grandma doesn't like her. There is a yellow tabby cat rubbing
Floyd | against her legs.
Floyd |
Floyd | There are cats everywhere. The trailer is filled with cats of every
Floyd | size, color, and condition, many still pretty wild. Cats recline,
Floyd | stroll, and argue on every chair, couch, and table in her house.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "exit"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               176
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EXIT
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x garden"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               177
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GARDEN
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady's garden is overflowing with red and orange and white and
Floyd | yellow flowers.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady steps out of her trailer, going slowly down the steps.
Floyd | The tabby shoots out the door ahead of her, almost tripping her.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take flower"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               177
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE FLOWER
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go to c loop"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               178
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO TO C LOOP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors, though the one's across from Lee's trailer
Floyd | go red, brown, green, red, brown, green, which is weird. Did they do
Floyd | that on purpose? The most noteworthy thing on this loop for you is
Floyd | Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is sitting on a lawn chair in his empty carport, chain smoking.
Floyd | You think maybe Lee is your mom's age, but looks much older, like he's
Floyd | already lived a lot. He has long dirty blond hair pulled back in an
Floyd | untidy ponytail. He's wearing a tanktop and green army pants. Honey
Floyd | tells you to stay clear of him, but he always says hi to you politely
Floyd | and might be the only person you know who calls you by your name.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey, Jody," Lee says, "How you doin'?".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "cf28"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               178
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "enter jody's trailer"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               178
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER JODY'S TRAILER
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "oops"
DavidW says, "I think we are Jody."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "enter lee's trailer"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        179
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER LEE'S TRAILER
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's Trailer
Floyd | Lee's trailer is empty. Or nearly so. It looks like he moved in
Floyd | yesterday, but you know he's been here for a long time. Where is his
Floyd | furniture? There is a small table with a single chair. A tiny black
Floyd | and white TV on a crate. And that's about it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x tv"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        180
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TV
Floyd |
Floyd | This is a tiny portable black and white set with a giant channel
Floyd | changer and bent rabbit ears propped on a crate.
Floyd |
Floyd | The TV is currently switched off.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee comes in stubbing out his cigarette in an ashtray and says, "Hey,
Floyd | Jody."
Floyd |
Floyd | "So what's up in your world?" Lee asks. "Anything good? Oh, I have
Floyd | something for you."
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is fumbling around in a drawer.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "That would explain 'JoJo'."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        181
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey, make yourself comfortable," Lee says. "Mi casa, es su casa. That
Floyd | means 'My home is your home.' Do you want anything? A drink or
Floyd | anything?"
Floyd |
Floyd | It makes you freaked out to think of drinking or eating in Lee's
Floyd | trailer. You can smell a little alcohol on his breath like your
Floyd | step-dad.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is fumbling around in a drawer.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask jody for drink"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        182
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK JODY FOR DRINK
Floyd |
Floyd | You does not respond.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Okay, so last time we were talking about my job. The one at the
Floyd | machine shop," Lee says. "I don't work there anymore, but I still have
Floyd | a friend who does, a guy who was in my unit."
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is still looking for something.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        183
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I told my friend that you really liked the ball bearing I gave you,"
Floyd | Lee is still fumbling in a drawer.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I told him you liked how shiny and heavy it was. And so,"  Lee seems
Floyd | to find what he's looking for and puts it behind his back. "He gave me
Floyd | this."
Floyd |
Floyd | He holds out a solid cube about the size of your hand. Not as shiny as
Floyd | the ball bearing, but with a beautiful metal sheen.  You want to hold
Floyd | it in your hand and feel its weight. You put out your hand and, for a
Floyd | moment, are scared Lee is going to snatch it back.
Floyd |
Floyd | But Lee puts the cube in your hand with a smile. It's heavier even
Floyd | than it appears.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x cube"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        184
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CUBE
Floyd |
Floyd | This is a solid metal cube about the size of your hand. It has very
Floyd | slightly rounded edges. Not as shiny as a ball bearing, but it's
Floyd | really pretty. It's considerably heavier than it appears.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee watches you with evident enjoyment as you check out the gift.
Floyd | Suddenly you remember that you got in trouble for the ball bearing and
Floyd | your mom told you to give it back. And you didn't. Because you thought
Floyd | it would hurt Lee's feelings.
Floyd |
Floyd | What will happen if your mom discovers this? You determine to hide
Floyd | the cube and not let her find out..
Floyd |
Floyd | You start to thank Lee, but he looks embarrassed even before you say
Floyd | it and cuts you off. "I wonder what's on the tube," He turns to the
Floyd | television and starts fiddling with the rabbit ears.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "throw rock at lee"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        185
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW ROCK AT LEE
Floyd |
Floyd | That seems like a really terrible idea. You think better of it.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee switches the TV on.
Floyd |
Floyd | The little black and white TV is playing The Big Valley. This show is
Floyd | kind of like mom's soap operas, but in the wild west. There's a
Floyd | gunfight in the street and a girl in a saloon and some other stuff.
Floyd |
Floyd | "There's never anything really on. Don't know why I bother," Lee says.
Floyd | "Feel free to find something that you like."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "change channel"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        186
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CHANGE CHANNEL
Floyd |
Floyd | You change the TV to channel 7.
Floyd |
Floyd | Guiding Light is on. At least this soap opera isn't in a hospital.
Floyd | It's a court room instead. But the people are still doing the same
Floyd | things, yelling at each other and crying and stuff.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        187
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | You change the TV channel all the way around from 7 to 2, skipping 9
Floyd | since nothing is ever on.
Floyd |
Floyd | One Life to Live is on. There's a lady talking to a guy who doesn't
Floyd | know who he is or where he is.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        188
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | You change the TV from channel 2 to channel 4.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is on. You know this one. Bobby writes a book report
Floyd | about his hero Jesse James. Then in a dream, Bobby and the rest of the
Floyd | family are on a train, all dressed up old timey when Jesse James robs
Floyd | the train and shoots the family. Weird.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "watch tv"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        189
Floyd | >
Floyd | > WATCH TV
Floyd |
Floyd | This is a tiny portable black and white set with a giant channel
Floyd | changer and bent rabbit ears propped on a crate The little black and
Floyd | white TV is playing The Brady Bunch. You know this one. Bobby writes a
Floyd | book report about his hero Jesse James. Then in a dream, Bobby and the
Floyd | rest of the family are on a train, all dressed up old timey when Jesse
Floyd | James robs the train and shoots the family. Weird.
Floyd |
Floyd | The TV is currently switched on.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's TV is still playing The Brady Bunch.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about cat lady"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        190
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT CAT LADY
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee glances toward D Loop. "I don't have nothin' to say about that
Floyd | lady," Lee says, "but don't even get me started on her cats."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about cats"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        191
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT CATS
Floyd |
Floyd | "Honestly, I don't mind cats. I like them really," Lee says, taking a
Floyd | long drag off of his cigarette. "They're independent. They're smart.
Floyd | They're survivors. They're only interested in people as long as they
Floyd | feed them." Lee glances toward D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about rachel"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        192
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is still talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is still blaring on Lee's TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | "But over there," Lee says, "That's not a lady who loves cats. That's
Floyd | a lady who collects things. And it happens to be cats.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about rachel"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        193
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee still has more to say.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is on Lee's little TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is angry and stubs out his cigarette in a coffee can. "They're
Floyd | living things, man! They need to be loved. And petted. And each one
Floyd | needs a name and to be cared for and to feel unique in the whole
Floyd | world." He wipes his eyes angrily.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Oy. SHut up, Lee."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        194
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is still blaring on Lee's TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Sorry, I get carried away," Lee says. "I really like cats."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about rachel"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        195
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT RACHEL
Floyd |
Floyd | "I know your mom. Rachel," Lee says seriously. "She's good people. I
Floyd | get people up in my face all the time. People avoiding me. Your mom,
Floyd | she smiles nicely at me and tells me hello.
Floyd |
Floyd | After a moment, he says, "I think you're pretty lucky. To have a mom
Floyd | like that."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about nick"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        196
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT NICK
Floyd |
Floyd | "Yeah, I definitely don't know your dad," Lee says. "Is he around
Floyd | much? Do you see him ever?"
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's TV is still playing The Brady Bunch.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about step-dad"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        197
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT STEP-DAD
Floyd |
Floyd | "I don't know your step-dad, man," Lee says, "I heard him yelling at
Floyd | your mom once, but I'm in no position to criticize."
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is still blaring on Lee's TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about mary"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        198
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT MARY
Floyd |
Floyd | "She seems like a pretty nice old lady," Lee says.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's TV is still playing The Brady Bunch.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about me"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        199
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT ME
Floyd |
Floyd | "What's to tell?" Lee asks. "You are one badass little trooper who
Floyd | ain't gonna let nothing get you down. Nah, you got 'em licked, believe
Floyd | me."
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is on Lee's little TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about honey"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        200
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT HONEY
Floyd |
Floyd | "I got nothing to say about your grandma," Lee says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask lee about grandpa"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        201
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LEE ABOUT GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | "I don't know your grandpa that well, but he's always cool to me," Lee
Floyd | says.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is still blaring on Lee's TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Ok. I'm good."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "throw cube at lee"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        202
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW CUBE AT LEE
Floyd |
Floyd | You lack the nerve when it comes to the crucial moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Brady Bunch is on Lee's little TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        203
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's Trailer
Floyd | Lee's trailer is empty. Or nearly so.  There is a small table with a
Floyd | single chair. A tiny black and white TV on a crate. And that's about
Floyd | it.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee is watching TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "out"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               204
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OUT
Floyd |
Floyd | You give a wave to Lee as you go.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Alright, drop by any time, Jody," Lee says. "You take care of
Floyd | yourself. And don't let the assholes get you down," he adds with a
Floyd | wink.
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go b loop"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               205
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO B LOOP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here, and if you say it really really fast -- B Loop B Loop B
Floyd | Loop B Loop Bloop Bloop Bloop -- it sounds funny. Rows of trailers on
Floyd | either side, some with big old cars, some not. Other than your
Floyd | grandparent's trailer, there's nothing really interesting here. Well,
Floyd | except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bike"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               206
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BIKE
Floyd |
Floyd | This is your trusty red Schwinn with a white banana seat.
Floyd | Unfortunately, the tires are so flat it barely rolls. Poo.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x tires"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               207
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TIRES
Floyd |
Floyd | This is your trusty red Schwinn with a white banana seat.
Floyd | Unfortunately, the tires are so flat it barely rolls. Poo.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          208
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's Trailer
Floyd | This trailer feels comfy to you, as much home as your real home with
Floyd | your mom. Honey and Grandpa have lived here as long as you remember.
Floyd | All these things are touchstones of familiarity, the floral-patterned
Floyd | couch on which you and Grandpa cuddle and watch Bowling for Dollars,
Floyd | the big TV, even the brown carpeting with its mottled pattern that
Floyd | looks like lichen on rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | Today all the windows are steamed up. Fragrant steam wafts from the
Floyd | kitchen. Occasionally, you hear the rattle of jars and lids being
Floyd | washed and set out.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary is looming over the stove in the kitchen, stirring a
Floyd | huge vat of blackberry jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh hullo, dear," says your Aunt Mary, stacking jam jars and lids in
Floyd | the dish drainer.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x mary"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          209
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MARY
Floyd |
Floyd | This is your Aunt Mary, or actually your Great Aunt Mary since she is
Floyd | your Grandma Honey's sister. She is a huge woman and wears an old lady
Floyd | dress with flowers and a checked apron. She is stirring the pot of
Floyd | blackberry jam continuously and staring into space.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x jam"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          210
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X JAM
Floyd |
Floyd | The pot of blackberry jam is bubbling blackly on low heat like the La
Floyd | Brea Tar Pits -- but better smelling. Aunt Mary is staring off into
Floyd | space and stirring the pot continuously. There are jam jars and lids
Floyd | set out ready to receive the jam when it is ready. Generally, Aunt
Floyd | Mary shoos you away when she is making jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask mary about lee"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          211
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT LEE
Floyd |
Floyd | "Who? Oh, Lee. Well, that young man, I can tell he's had a troubled
Floyd | life," she says. "You probably want to talk to your grandmother before
Floyd | talking to him. Though he's always been decent to me."
Floyd |
Floyd | Aunt Mary pauses for a moment from her jam making to talk to you, "You
Floyd | know your grandpa may need some company if he's bringing that bucket
Floyd | up here."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask mary about cats"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          212
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT CATS
Floyd |
Floyd | "Uh huh," Aunt Mary says distractedly.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Also, when you go down to the creek, ask your Grandpa and Grandma
Floyd | about lunch," Aunt Mary says. "I can make some sandwiches to send down
Floyd | with you."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask mary about lunch"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          213
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT LUNCH
Floyd |
Floyd | "Later we'll make some lunch for you and your Honey and grandpa," she
Floyd | says.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Why don't you hustle down to the creek and help your grandpa," Aunt
Floyd | Mary says and goes back to stirring the jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach asks, "Should we go back to grandpa?"
DavidW says, "probably, yes."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go creek"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               214
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here. Rows of trailers on either side, some with big old
Floyd | cars, some not. Other than your grandparent's trailer, there's nothing
Floyd | really interesting here. Well, except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "It's obvious the story won't advance until we return to Grandpa."
Zach says (to Floyd), "ride bike"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               214
Floyd | >
Floyd | > RIDE BIKE
Floyd |
Floyd | Unfortunately, the tires of your bicycle are so flat it barely rolls.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go creek"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               215
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on the other side of the
Floyd | tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               216
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady is out in front of her trailer watering her tiny,
Floyd | overflowing garden. She is still wearing her bathrobe or a dress that
Floyd | looks like a bathrobe. There is a yellow tabby cat rubbing against her
Floyd | legs.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on the other side of the
Floyd | tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          217
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Two ants
Floyd | are working together to carry a seed that is bigger than both of them
Floyd | put together.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              218
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific."
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         219
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        220
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the oppressive heat, the cool shade is a welcome
Floyd | relief.
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | Down a long wooded trail that zigs down the bank, you emerge from the
Floyd | thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The swimming hole lies
Floyd | before you, a deep pool carved out of and surrounded by smooth granite
Floyd | rocks. It is big enough that you can swim like they taught you at the
Floyd | YWCA from one end to the other, and deep enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | From over by the blackberry clearing, you think grandpa's calling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         221
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the shaded trail, the heat is like a physical force
Floyd | that pushes against you.
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | Is that grandpa calling you?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            222
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | The dirt road slopes down as it runs along the creek before turning
Floyd | into a trail over the stone bridge. The old creekside road is seldom
Floyd | used now and in poor condition with deep ruts and sandy areas.
Floyd | Nowadays it is only used by people walking down to Bear Creek from the
Floyd | highway, fishermen and berry pickers mostly. Here, someone's field
Floyd | backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link fence. The field
Floyd | is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The old dirt road continues on uphill for a long stretch running
Floyd | parallel to the creek downstream. Back toward the old stone bridge,
Floyd | the road narrows to a ragged trail as it crosses the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a dog behind the fence, alternately digging and barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "throw rock at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            223
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW ROCK AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog barely dodges the rock, then erupts into a furious storm of
Floyd | barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            222
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "throw cube at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            223
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW CUBE AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You lack the nerve when it comes to the crucial moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | You think you hear your Grandpa calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         224
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge
Floyd | The road may have crossed the creek over an old stone bridge at one
Floyd | time but is now just a narrow trail. From here you can peer down into
Floyd | Bear Creek. Movement in the sparkling water and the old mossy bridge
Floyd | catch your eye. You watch two leaves swirl by on the current.
Floyd |
Floyd | On one side of the bridge, the path turns out into a dirt road that
Floyd | runs down along the creek. On the other side, the blackberry trail
Floyd | goes up the creek back toward the berry picking spot. You can also get
Floyd | in the creek or go to a grassy bank from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be plainly heard from across the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "He's gonna call us worse than Trouser Whistle, though, I bet."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go blackberry trail"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     225
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BLACKBERRY TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Trail
Floyd | This is a trail running roughly parallel the creek with tall
Floyd | blackberry brambles on either side. In one place, there are Willows
Floyd | hanging down over the trail that tickle the back of your neck as you
Floyd | duck under them.
Floyd |
Floyd | It looks like the trail used to continue further on down the creek on
Floyd | this side, but is now hidden by underbrush -- though you could try to
Floyd | follow the lost trail. Farther on down the creek, the trail turns to
Floyd | cross an overgrown stone bridge. In the other direction, up the path,
Floyd | is the tangle of blackberry bushes.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear grandpa calling you from the blackberry clearing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    226
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Tangle
Floyd | There are paths through the brambles, a maze with tantalizing fruit.
Floyd | Although this area is mostly picked since you and Honey and Grandpa
Floyd | came this way when you started picking this morning. You can still
Floyd | find some ripe berries though.
Floyd |
Floyd | Through the blackberry tangle, there's a trail going down along the
Floyd | creek shaded by lush green willow trees. Back the way you came is the
Floyd | clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa's calling you
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  227
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | You are near the creek, but it can't be seen through the blackberry
Floyd | brambles. This is a pleasant clearing carpeted with stubbly grass
Floyd | under a sycamore tree. There are paths and clearings beaten down among
Floyd | the brambles that allow you to squeeze in to get the ripest berries.
Floyd | There is a big bucket in the middle of the clearing. Grandpa's shirt
Floyd | and Honey's portable transistor radio are on the bank under the tree
Floyd | playing music.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the path and down the creek, there's a tangle of blackberry
Floyd | bushes. Up the hill is the blackberry brambles where you've been
Floyd | picking for a while.
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa are here picking berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Lonely People" by America, one of your favorites, begins
Floyd | playing on Honey's radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hey, Monkey," Grandpa says looking at you, "I'm gonna take this
Floyd | bucket of berries up to your Aunt Mary. You gonna help your old
Floyd | grandpa?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "yes"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  228
Floyd | >
Floyd | > YES
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa nods.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take bucket"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  229
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | That's going to be pretty heavy. Better leave it for Grandpa to carry.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Okay, I'm headed back to the house, Ragamuffin. Why don't ya come
Floyd | with me?" Grandpa says. He picks up the big bucket with one hand that
Floyd | you probably couldn't even budge, and heads off down the trail toward
Floyd | the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "follow"
Floyd ]  Lost in the Brambles                                 230
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOLLOW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Lost in the Brambles
Floyd | This spot, a little ways from where Honey and Grandpa are picking, has
Floyd | some good berries. Under the pine trees, the air smells good.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking around: The clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking
Floyd | is just down the hill from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sunlight comes slanting through the trees in the morning light.
Floyd | The air is still crisp in the shade with the early promise of a hot
Floyd | midsummer day.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Uh."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Clearing                                  229
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Clearing
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    230
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Tangle
Floyd | There are paths through the brambles, a maze with tantalizing fruit.
Floyd | Although this area is mostly picked since you and Honey and Grandpa
Floyd | came this way when you started picking this morning. You can still
Floyd | find some ripe berries though.
Floyd |
Floyd | Through the blackberry tangle, there's a trail going down along the
Floyd | creek shaded by lush green willow trees. Back the way you came is the
Floyd | clearing where Honey and Grandpa have been picking.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Grandpa is here with the big bucket full of berries.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about mary"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    231
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT MARY
Floyd |
Floyd | "She's your Honey's older sister. Did you know your Honey had twelve
Floyd | brothers and sisters. Let's see, you know Uncle Charley and Aunt Ethel
Floyd | and Aunt Mary," Grandpa says counting on his fingers. "Mary has
Floyd | grandkids that are your mom's age."
Floyd |
Floyd | After a DJ break, the nearby radio's playing "One of These Nights".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about lee"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    232
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT LEE
Floyd |
Floyd | "I don't know much about him, Noodle," Grandpa says. "He's pretty
Floyd | quiet and keeps mostly to himself. I heard from your Aunt Mary that he
Floyd | was in Vietnam."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about cat lady"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    233
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT CAT LADY
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, Sharon?" Grandpa laughs, "You call her the Cat Lady? You got that
Floyd | from your Honey and your mom. They're bad influences on you and I
Floyd | can't wait to tell them," he says with a smile.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I hope you don't call her that to her face," he says seriously.
Floyd | "Though she's a nice old lady and probably wouldn't even care."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about cat sharon"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    234
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT CAT SHARON
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa is still talking.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Sharon's a nice old lady who's had a hard life. You be nice to her,
Floyd | Ragamuffin," Grandpa says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about Vietnam"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    235
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT VIETNAM
Floyd |
Floyd | "War is not a lot of fun, I can tell you that," Grandpa says. "Even
Floyd | though I didn't see a lot of action in dubya-dubya-two like a lot of
Floyd | guys, it was a pretty brutal, mean time. Even for people like your
Floyd | Honey who were helping out here at home."
Floyd |
Floyd | On the nearby radio, a new song begins: "Wasted Days and Wasted
Floyd | Nights".
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about step-dad"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    236
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT STEP-DAD
Floyd |
Floyd | "Mark? He seemed like a nice enough guy when I met him, but..."
Floyd | Grandpa looks like he's going to get mad at you, "he better start
Floyd | being a whole heck of a lot nicer to you and your mom or he's going to
Floyd | have to answer to me. That's all I have to say."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about cube"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Tangle                                    237
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT CUBE
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hm, got me, Peanut," Grandpa shrugs.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     238
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Blackberry Trail
Floyd | This is a trail running roughly parallel the creek with tall
Floyd | blackberry brambles on either side. In one place, there are Willows
Floyd | hanging down over the trail that tickle the back of your neck as you
Floyd | duck under them.
Floyd |
Floyd | It looks like the trail used to continue further on down the creek on
Floyd | this side, but is now hidden by underbrush -- though you could try to
Floyd | follow the lost trail. Farther on down the creek, the trail turns to
Floyd | cross an overgrown stone bridge. In the other direction, up the path,
Floyd | is the tangle of blackberry bushes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you along the trail.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "show cube to grandpa"
Floyd ]  Blackberry Trail                                     239
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHOW CUBE TO GRANDPA
Floyd |
Floyd | "Hm, looks good, but I'm no expert," Grandpa smiles and hands it back
Floyd | to you.
Floyd |
Floyd | The song "Cat's In the Cradle," one you like to sing to, begins
Floyd | playing on a distant radio.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Stone Bridge                                         240
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd | You glance one more time at the old overgrown creek trail before
Floyd | crossing the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Stone Bridge
Floyd | The road may have crossed the creek over an old stone bridge at one
Floyd | time but is now just a narrow trail. From here you can peer down into
Floyd | Bear Creek. Movement in the sparkling water and the old mossy bridge
Floyd | catch your eye. You catch a glimmering flash in the depths near a
Floyd | boulder.
Floyd |
Floyd | On one side of the bridge, the path turns out into a dirt road that
Floyd | runs down along the creek. On the other side, the blackberry trail
Floyd | goes up the creek back toward the berry picking spot. You can also get
Floyd | in the creek or go to a grassy bank from here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you at the stone bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            241
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | The dirt road slopes down as it runs along the creek before turning
Floyd | into a trail over the stone bridge. The old creekside road is seldom
Floyd | used now and in poor condition with deep ruts and sandy areas.
Floyd | Nowadays it is only used by people walking down to Bear Creek from the
Floyd | highway, fishermen and berry pickers mostly. Here, someone's field
Floyd | backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link fence. The field
Floyd | is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The old dirt road continues on uphill for a long stretch running
Floyd | parallel to the creek downstream. Back toward the old stone bridge,
Floyd | the road narrows to a ragged trail as it crosses the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a dog behind the fence, alternately digging and barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you reach the dirt road.  "Your old
Floyd | grandpa can barely keep up with you," Grandpa says, smiling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "tell grandpa about dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            242
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL GRANDPA ABOUT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | "Yeah, I know about that pooch," Grandpa says. "That dog needs to give
Floyd | it a rest."
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         243
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you walk along the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell grandpa about tree"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         244
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL GRANDPA ABOUT TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | "The big tree up by the road? You climbed all the way to the top? When
Floyd | did you get so big and strong," Grandpa says, smiling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "tell grandpa about pool"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         245
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL GRANDPA ABOUT POOL
Floyd |
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell grandpa about pool"
Floyd | "I know you are almost a grown up, but you be careful down at that old
Floyd | swimming hole," Grandpa says. "Maybe tomorrow we can go swimming."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         246
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL GRANDPA ABOUT POOL
Floyd |
Floyd | "If you really want to go swimming, maybe we can go and get your
Floyd | swimsuit and go down there together," Grandpa says, "I don't want you
Floyd | to go swimming by yourself."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              247
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd | You glance down at the trail to the swimming hole as you walk along
Floyd | the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific."
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you reach the railroad crossing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          248
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Some of the
Floyd | red ants are scouting about individually.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you go through the back gate into the
Floyd | trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell grandpa about ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          249
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL GRANDPA ABOUT ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | "You better watch out, JoJo," Grandpa says. "Those red ants pack a
Floyd | mean bite."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               250
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you head toward B Loop.  "Alright, Speedy
Floyd | Gonzolas," Grandpa says, smiling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               251
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you head toward B Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               252
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here. Rows of trailers on either side, some with big old
Floyd | cars, some not. Other than your grandparent's trailer, there's nothing
Floyd | really interesting here. Well, except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you as you head toward B Loop.  "I got ya,
Floyd | Ragamuffin," Grandpa says, smiling.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          253
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's Trailer
Floyd | This trailer feels comfy to you, as much home as your real home with
Floyd | your mom. Honey and Grandpa have lived here as long as you remember.
Floyd | All of the familiar stuff, the couch and the TV are here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Today all the windows are steamed up. Fragrant steam wafts from the
Floyd | kitchen. Occasionally, you hear the rattle of jars and lids being
Floyd | washed and set out.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary is looming over the stove in the kitchen, stirring a
Floyd | huge vat of blackberry jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa catches up to you and comes into the trailer hauling the big
Floyd | bucket.  "Ah, to be young again," Grandpa says, smiling.
Floyd |
Floyd | "Mornin", Mary," Grandpa says as he comes in.
Floyd |
Floyd | "How's the berry picking?" Mary asks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x jars"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          254
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X JARS
Floyd |
Floyd | Jars and lids and pots and pans and paraffin and tongs and boiling
Floyd | water. Who knew making jam was so complicated?
Floyd |
Floyd | "Pretty good," Grandpa says, gesturing at the bucket, "We got a whole
Floyd | bucketfull for you. Old Whistle Britches here, picked most of these
Floyd | and ate twice as many more." Grandpa winks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | Grandpa helps your Aunt Mary pour the bucket of berries slowly into
Floyd | several giant pots with a series of juicy plops.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          255
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your grandpa gets a big glass of water from the sink and drinks it.
Floyd |
Floyd | Aunt Mary turns to you, "Sweetheart, Can I get your help making
Floyd | lunch?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          256
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, you don't say," Mary says vaguely, testing the jam by letting it
Floyd | run off the edge of a spoon.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "make lunch"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          256
Floyd | >
Floyd | > MAKE LUNCH
Floyd |
Floyd | Aunt Mary already has you working on the assembly line making tuna
Floyd | sandwiches.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "So that wasn't actually a question :D"
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell mary about may day"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          257
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL MARY ABOUT MAY DAY
Floyd |
Floyd | "Uh huh," Aunt Mary says distractedly, plopping paraffin into a double
Floyd | boiler to melt.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "ask grandpa about lunch"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          258
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK GRANDPA ABOUT LUNCH
Floyd |
Floyd | "Isn't it just about lunch time?" your grandpa smiles. "You know me,
Floyd | you can set your watch to my stomach."
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary recruits you to help make lunch, getting out cans of
Floyd | Chicken of the Sea, Miracle Whip, and Wonder Bread.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x tuna"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          259
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TUNA
Floyd |
Floyd | Several cans of Chicken of the Sea, Miracle Whip, and Wonder Bread are
Floyd | out for making tuna sandwiches.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I better hustle back," Grandpa says, "before Ellie needs the bucket."
Floyd | Grandpa turns to you on his way out, "See you down there, Monkey."
Floyd | Grandpa heads out the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary has you on the assembly line constructing tuna fish
Floyd | sandwiches and putting them in sandwich bags.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take lunch"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          259
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE LUNCH
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          260
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a metal cube, a rock, a penny, and a pail. And your
Floyd | hands are spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and your arm
Floyd | hurts a little. You are going to get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | You pack all the sandwiches up in a brown paper bag, and Aunt Mary
Floyd | puts away the sandwich makin's. "Okay, you take those sandwiches down
Floyd | to your grandparents. All those blackberries they're picking. It's
Floyd | hungry work." Aunt Mary smiles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take bag"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          261
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BAG
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "eat sandwhiches"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          261
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EAT SANDWHICHES
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "eat sandwiches"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          262
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EAT SANDWICHES
Floyd |
Floyd | You eat the tuna sandwich. Not bad.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          261
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's Trailer
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW | Aunt Mary says, "Don't forget to put on your red cloak. It's getting chilly out there."
Zach says (to Floyd), "take bucket"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          261
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BUCKET
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               262
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here. Rows of trailers on either side, some with big old
Floyd | cars, some not. Other than your grandparent's trailer, there's nothing
Floyd | really interesting here. Well, except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               263
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               264
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          265
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Some of the
Floyd | ants have formed a line up the legs of the picnic table. Maybe they've
Floyd | found the remains of a picnic.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          266
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | The ants wander about purposefully, though you can't tell exactly what
Floyd | they are up to. There is a drop of something on the pavement that the
Floyd | ants are very interested in.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "feed tuna to ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          266
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FEED TUNA TO ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can only do that to something animate.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "give sandwich to ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          266
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE SANDWICH TO ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can only do that to something animate.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Oh fine."
Zach:(
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              267
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific."
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         268
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | Something is different. The hairs on your arm and the back of your
Floyd | neck stand up.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "listen"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         269
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LISTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | You can still hear the dog barking, of course.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard somewhere down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            270
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | The dirt road slopes down as it runs along the creek before turning
Floyd | into a trail over the stone bridge. The old creekside road is seldom
Floyd | used now and in poor condition with deep ruts and sandy areas.
Floyd | Nowadays it is only used by people walking down to Bear Creek from the
Floyd | highway, fishermen and berry pickers mostly. Here, someone's field
Floyd | backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link fence. The field
Floyd | is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The old dirt road continues on uphill for a long stretch running
Floyd | parallel to the creek downstream. Back toward the old stone bridge,
Floyd | the road narrows to a ragged trail as it crosses the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is wandering in the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog succeeded in tunneling under the fence and is now loose. It is
Floyd | sniffing the bushes alongside the dirt road. When it sees you, it
Floyd | stands in the road and growls.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
Zach says (to Floyd), "cf29"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            270
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            271
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Kind of a yellowish medium dog with pointy ears. You don't know what
Floyd | kind. It's not a german shepherd or a doberman but it looks mean like
Floyd | that. Some kind of guard dog maybe.
Floyd |
Floyd | Looking more carefully, you notice that it has prominent teats. So
Floyd | it's a girl dog. Maybe she's pregnant or was. You are pleased with
Floyd | yourself for noticing. You know about this stuff because of Mika who
Floyd | had kittens.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "throw rock at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            272
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW ROCK AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog barely dodges the rock, then erupts into a furious storm of
Floyd | barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog stands in the road and barks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            271
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Could there be a litter of puppies?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "throw sandwich at dof"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            271
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW SANDWICH AT DOF
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "throw sandwich at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            272
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW SANDWICH AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You lack the nerve when it comes to the crucial moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog chews on the grass on the side of the road for a second and
Floyd | then resumes its barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "pet dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            273
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PET DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You're pretty scared of this furiously barking animal, and don't want
Floyd | to get too close.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog stands in the road and barks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "bark"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            273
Floyd | >
Floyd | > BARK
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "shout"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            273
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHOUT
Floyd |
Floyd | What do you want to shout hello to?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "shout at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            274
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHOUT AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog ignores you.
Floyd |
Floyd | You've got to get back to the clearing. There must be another
Floyd | way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach exclaims, "Cross the river!"
DavidW says, "Secret trail time, maybe."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            275
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog looks at you sourly and you don't dare proceed.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog sits and scratches her ear with its hind leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swim hole"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            275
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIM HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | That noun did not make sense in this context.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         276
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        277
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the oppressive heat, the cool shade is a welcome
Floyd | relief.
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | Down a long wooded trail that zigs down the bank, you emerge from the
Floyd | thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The swimming hole lies
Floyd | before you, a deep pool carved out of and surrounded by smooth granite
Floyd | rocks. It is big enough that you can swim like they taught you at the
Floyd | YWCA from one end to the other, and deep enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        278
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Too heavy.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sun is slanting down golden. Gnats are drifting in and out of the
Floyd | sunshine in sparkling clouds.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go downstream"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             279
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO DOWNSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd | You carefully navigate the rocky bank, making your way downstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | Here the creek broadens out a little and, except for a place in the
Floyd | middle where the current is swift, there are big stones, boulders
Floyd | really, scattered about in the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | The shoreline ends at a steep bank further downstream, though it looks
Floyd | like you might be able to cross the creek on the boulders in
Floyd | midstream. You can also go back along the rocks upstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "cross creek"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             280
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CROSS CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | The current here is too strong and it scares you. You saw a TV show
Floyd | once with your grandpa about people in rafts and one man who fell off
Floyd | and got caught under a rock and drowned. You think better of the idea.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "move stones"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             281
Floyd | >
Floyd | > MOVE STONES
Floyd |
Floyd | Those are fixed in place.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance from this side of the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Hmm, maybe not"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x bolders"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             281
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BOLDERS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "enter log"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             281
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I'm a bit confused with the geography; I never mapped this game."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x boulders"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             282
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BOULDERS
Floyd |
Floyd | There are scattered boulders in the creek bed on which you might be
Floyd | able to cross.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb on log"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             282
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB ON LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Oh we moved."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go boulder"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             283
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BOULDER
Floyd |
Floyd | You get part way across on the boulders, but there is an open spot in
Floyd | the middle and a really swift current.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go upstream"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        284
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO UPSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | You emerge from the thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The
Floyd | swimming hole lies before you, a deep pool carved out of and
Floyd | surrounded by smooth granite rocks. It is big enough that you can swim
Floyd | like they taught you at the YWCA from one end to the other, and deep
Floyd | enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        285
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You'd probably fall in the water immediately.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Do we need a stepping stone? The cube, maybe?"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "swim across pool"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        285
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SWIM ACROSS POOL
Floyd |
Floyd | I only understood you as far as wanting to swim.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "push log downstream"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        285
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUSH LOG DOWNSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "push lo"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        285
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUSH LO
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "push log"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        286
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUSH LOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Nothing obvious happens.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "The log is in the pool, not the creek."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x cube"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        287
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CUBE
Floyd |
Floyd | This is a solid metal cube about the size of your hand. It has very
Floyd | slightly rounded edges. Not as shiny as a ball bearing, but it's
Floyd | really pretty. It's considerably heavier than it appears.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on this side of the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go downstream"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             288
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO DOWNSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd | You carefully navigate the rocky bank, making your way downstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | Here the creek broadens out a little and, except for a place in the
Floyd | middle where the current is swift, there are big stones, boulders
Floyd | really, scattered about in the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | The shoreline ends at a steep bank further downstream, though it looks
Floyd | like you might be able to cross the creek on the boulders in
Floyd | midstream. You can also go back along the rocks upstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance from this side of the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I'm thinking, when on the boulder, if we can put the cube in the creek."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go boulder"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             289
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BOULDER
Floyd |
Floyd | You hop from boulder to boulder out into the broad river, but there is
Floyd | an open spot in the middle and a really swift current.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put cube in creek"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             290
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT CUBE IN CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | With a plunk, the metal cube disappears without a trace.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             289
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oops. Bad idea."
Zach says (to Floyd), "SAVE"
Zach says (to Floyd), "cf30"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SAVE
Floyd | %% Enter a save filename to write:
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             289
Floyd | > SAVEOk.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put cube in open spot"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             289
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT CUBE IN OPEN SPOT
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "jump"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             290
Floyd | >
Floyd | > JUMP
Floyd |
Floyd | In the water? And be swept downstream to certain death? No thanks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "cross"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             291
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CROSS
Floyd |
Floyd | The current here is too strong and it scares you. You saw a TV show
Floyd | once with your grandpa about people in rafts and one man who fell off
Floyd | and got caught under a rock and drowned. You think better of the idea.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put rock in spot"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             291
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT ROCK IN SPOT
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put rock in creek"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             292
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT ROCK IN CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | With a plunk, the rock disappears without a trace.
Floyd |
Floyd | You get a feeling something is wrong. What if something happened
Floyd | to your grandpa?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             291
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             292
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a tuna sandwich, a brown paper bag, inside which are
Floyd | two tuna sandwiches, a metal cube, a rock, a penny, and a pail. And
Floyd | your hands are spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and your
Floyd | arm hurts a little. You are going to get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | You get a feeling something is wrong. What if something happened
Floyd | to your grandpa?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach asks, "Hmm, does that mean we should go back?"
genericgeekgirl asks, "I guess so?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go upstream"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        293
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO UPSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | You emerge from the thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The
Floyd | swimming hole lies before you, a deep pool carved out of and
Floyd | surrounded by smooth granite rocks. It is big enough that you can swim
Floyd | like they taught you at the YWCA from one end to the other, and deep
Floyd | enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is a floating length of log here, bobbing around at the edges of
Floyd | the swimming hole.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can also see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "up"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         294
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UP
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the shaded trail, the heat is like a physical force
Floyd | that pushes against you.
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I think we need to get to Grandpa, but perhaps by a new route."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go bridge"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            295
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BRIDGE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Dirt Road
Floyd | The dirt road slopes down as it runs along the creek before turning
Floyd | into a trail over the stone bridge. The old creekside road is seldom
Floyd | used now and in poor condition with deep ruts and sandy areas.
Floyd | Nowadays it is only used by people walking down to Bear Creek from the
Floyd | highway, fishermen and berry pickers mostly. Here, someone's field
Floyd | backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link fence. The field
Floyd | is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The old dirt road continues on uphill for a long stretch running
Floyd | parallel to the creek downstream. Back toward the old stone bridge,
Floyd | the road narrows to a ragged trail as it crosses the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is wandering in the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go field"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            296
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO FIELD
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not something you can enter.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog sits and scratches her ear with its hind leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "follow dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            297
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOLLOW DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Well, she's right here.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "give sandwich to do"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            297
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE SANDWICH TO DO
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "give sandwich to dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            298
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE SANDWICH TO DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog perks up her ears as you approach. The dog extends her nose
Floyd | cautiously to sniff the tuna sandwich, looks alarmed, and then barks
Floyd | furiously at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog chews on the grass on the side of the road for a second and
Floyd | then resumes its barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "throw sandwich at dog"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            299
Floyd | >
Floyd | > THROW SANDWICH AT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | You lack the nerve when it comes to the crucial moment.
Floyd |
Floyd | You've got to get back to the clearing. There must be another
Floyd | way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "drop sandwich"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            300
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DROP SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Dropped.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            301
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog chews on the grass on the side of the road for a second and
Floyd | then resumes its barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take sandwich"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            302
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog stands in the road and barks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Where is the fence from here?"
Zach says, ">put fire ants on sandwich. give sandwich to dog."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x fence"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            303
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FENCE
Floyd |
Floyd | A chain link fence, dropping in the middle.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog sits and scratches her ear with its hind leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Between us and the field, I guess"
DavidW says (to Zach), "That's another possible choice."
Zach says (to Floyd), "x field"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            304
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FIELD
Floyd |
Floyd | Someone's field backs up to the road and is separated by a chain link
Floyd | fence. The field is a mass of tall weeds and old junk cars.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog stands in the road and barks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x cars"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            305
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CARS
Floyd |
Floyd | These are old-timey cars. Big boxy things with big rounded fenders.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog chews on the grass on the side of the road for a second and
Floyd | then resumes its barking.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Maybe pine sap on the sandwich would make the sandwich more attractive to the ants."
DavidW says (to Floyd), "search cars"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            306
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SEARCH CARS
Floyd |
Floyd | You find nothing of interest.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog sits and scratches her ear with its hind leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "search weeds"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            307
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SEARCH WEEDS
Floyd |
Floyd | You find nothing of interest.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog is making a racket.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put sap on sandwich"
Floyd ]  Dirt Road                                            308
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT SAP ON SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Try as you might, you can't get if off your hands easily.
Floyd |
Floyd | The dog stands in the road and barks at you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "hmm, the ants did change"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go picnic table"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         309
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO PICNIC TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard somewhere down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go picnic table"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              310
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO PICNIC TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd | You glance down at the trail to the swimming hole as you walk along
Floyd | the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific."
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl asks, "Can we somehow attack the dog with the ants?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go picnic table"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          311
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO PICNIC TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Some of the
Floyd | ants have formed a line up the legs of the picnic table. Maybe they've
Floyd | found the remains of a picnic.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x table"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          312
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd | You see nothing special about the picnic table.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x legs"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          312
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LEGS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          313
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | The ants wander about purposefully, though you can't tell exactly what
Floyd | they are up to. One red ant is at the edge of the picnic table. His
Floyd | feelers are waving. Is he looking at you? Weird.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "put sandwich on table"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          314
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT SANDWICH ON TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd | Putting things on the picnic table would achieve nothing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "give sandwich to ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          314
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GIVE SANDWICH TO ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can only do that to something animate.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Oh, right"
Zach says (to Floyd), "put ant on sandwich"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          315
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT ANT ON SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | (first taking the ant hill)
Floyd |
Floyd | That's fixed in place.
Floyd | You need to be holding the ant hill before you can put it on top of
Floyd | something else.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take ants"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          316
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | They're hardly portable.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "put sandwich on ant hill"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          317
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT SANDWICH ON ANT HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | Putting things on the ant hill would achieve nothing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x ant hill"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          318
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ANT HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | This ant hill rises up higher than the top of your sneakers. Some of
Floyd | the red ants are scouting about individually.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "drop sandwich"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          319
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DROP SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Dropped.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          320
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          321
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take sandwich"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          322
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          323
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a tuna sandwich, a brown paper bag, inside which are
Floyd | two tuna sandwiches, a metal cube, a rock, a penny, and a pail. And
Floyd | your hands are spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and your
Floyd | arm hurts a little. You are going to get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "put sandwich on ant hill"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          324
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT SANDWICH ON ANT HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | Putting things on the ant hill would achieve nothing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "kick hill"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          325
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KICK HILL
Floyd |
Floyd | You kick the ant hill, but now several ants are on your shoes and, oh
Floyd | no! on your leg! You dance around for a while swatting at yourself
Floyd | until you are satisfied that you are safe!
Floyd |
Floyd | The red ants are running around like crazy, looking for someone to
Floyd | attack.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "drop sandwich"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          326
Floyd | >
Floyd | > DROP SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Dropped.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on the other side of the
Floyd | tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          327
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl asks, "Maybe we can get the dog to follow us?"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "take sandwich"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          328
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE SANDWICH
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ants, go tracks"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          328
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ANTS, GO TRACKS
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't talk to the ants.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I suspect we can't get the dog to follow us if he's there as a blockade."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               329
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady is out in front of her trailer watering her tiny,
Floyd | overflowing garden. Her hair is kinda crazy, and that makes you a
Floyd | little unsettled. There is a yellow tabby cat rubbing against her
Floyd | legs.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell lady about dog"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               330
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL LADY ABOUT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | Oh dogs, they absolutely terrorize my babies. Just the other day,
Floyd | several of my kitties had to defend their very lives from a ferocious
Floyd | doggy that someone brought in to the park on a leash. It served that
Floyd | bad dog right and he had to be taken to the vet.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               331
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go loop b"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               332
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO LOOP B
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here. Rows of trailers on either side, some with big old
Floyd | cars, some not. Other than your grandparent's trailer, there's nothing
Floyd | really interesting here. Well, except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          333
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's Trailer
Floyd | This trailer feels comfy to you, as much home as your real home with
Floyd | your mom. Honey and Grandpa have lived here as long as you remember.
Floyd | All of the familiar stuff, the couch and the TV are here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Today all the windows are steamed up. Fragrant steam wafts from the
Floyd | kitchen. Occasionally, you hear the rattle of jars and lids being
Floyd | washed and set out.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary is looming over the stove in the kitchen, stirring a
Floyd | huge vat of blackberry jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "tell mary about dog"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          334
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TELL MARY ABOUT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, you don't say," Mary says vaguely.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach exclaims, "Waah, we're only 4!"
genericgeekgirl asks, "Eight?"
Zach says, "Whoops"
Zach says, "That makes more sense"
Zach says (to Floyd), "x me"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          335
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ME
Floyd |
Floyd | What's to say? You are eight and a half, and you are going into 4th
Floyd | grade in the fall. And you like riding your bike on dirt roads around
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's house. And your hands are spotted with pine pitch,
Floyd | your ribs still ache, and your arm hurts a little. You are going to
Floyd | get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Ah, 4th grade"
genericgeekgirl has just been eaten by a grue!
genericgeekgirl arrives, ready to play with the toys. genericgeekgirl says, "Sorry. I was eaten by a grue."
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask mary about dog"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          336
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT DOG
Floyd |
Floyd | "Uh huh," Aunt Mary says distractedly.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          337
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying a tuna sandwich, a brown paper bag, inside which are
Floyd | two tuna sandwiches, a metal cube, a rock, a penny, and a pail. And
Floyd | your hands are spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and your
Floyd | arm hurts a little. You are going to get in such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear the train, pretty far off still.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "l"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          338
Floyd | >
Floyd | > L
Floyd |
Floyd | Honey and Grandpa's Trailer
Floyd | This trailer feels comfy to you, as much home as your real home with
Floyd | your mom. Honey and Grandpa have lived here as long as you remember.
Floyd | All of the familiar stuff, the couch and the TV are here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Today all the windows are steamed up. Fragrant steam wafts from the
Floyd | kitchen. Occasionally, you hear the rattle of jars and lids being
Floyd | washed and set out.
Floyd |
Floyd | Your Aunt Mary is looming over the stove in the kitchen, stirring a
Floyd | huge vat of blackberry jam.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask mary about lunch"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          339
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT LUNCH
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, you go and take lunch to your Honey and grandpa," she says.
Floyd | "That's hungry work."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "ask mary about ants"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          340
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MARY ABOUT ANTS
Floyd |
Floyd | "I apologize, dear, but I have to go stir the jam," Mary says.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "show cube to mary"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          341
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SHOW CUBE TO MARY
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh, thanks, dear, but I couldn't," says Aunt Mary, stacking jam jars
Floyd | and lids in the dish drainer.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "help"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          341
Floyd | >
Floyd | > HELP
Floyd |
Floyd | I didn't understand that sentence.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "eat jam"
Floyd ]  Honey and Grandpa's Trailer                          342
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EAT JAM
Floyd |
Floyd | "Oh be careful, dear. The pot is very hot," Aunt Mary shoos you out of
Floyd | the kitchen.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear the train whistle blowing as it goes through town.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach asks, "Mind if I go back to the creek?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  B Loop                                               343
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | B Loop
Floyd | B Loop is just like C and D Loops, except Honey and Grandpa's trailer
Floyd | is right here. Rows of trailers on either side, some with big old
Floyd | cars, some not. Other than your grandparent's trailer, there's nothing
Floyd | really interesting here. Well, except for your bike.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go in to Honey and Grandpa's trailer of course. Or you can go
Floyd | back to C Loop and the train tracks behind the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see your bicycle here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               344
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "enter"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        345
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's Trailer
Floyd | Lee's trailer is empty. Or nearly so.  There is a small table with a
Floyd | single chair. A tiny black and white TV on a crate. And that's about
Floyd | it.
Floyd |
Floyd | After a bunch of commercials, Another World is on. This is another
Floyd | soap opera that you don't know, not one of your mom's.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x table"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        346
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TABLE
Floyd |
Floyd | Like the rest of Lee's trailer, the table is mostly empty. On the
Floyd | table, a newspaper and a coffee mug.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x mug"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        347
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MUG
Floyd |
Floyd | The mug has some kind of blue and yellow coat of arms on it, and says
Floyd | underneath in fancy letters "Brave and True." There is nothing in
Floyd | Lee's coffee mug except gross.
Floyd |
Floyd | The train whistle screams as it hits the crossing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take mug"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        348
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE MUG
Floyd |
Floyd | Your manners suggest that it is better to leave Lee's coffee cup
Floyd | alone.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "read newspaper"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        349
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | This is the local newspaper. Usually when grandpa reads the newspaper
Floyd | or Honey does the crossword, you ask for the comics. An article on the
Floyd | front page catches your eye.
Floyd |
Floyd | Lee's TV is still playing Another World.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "read article"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        350
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ ARTICLE
Floyd |
Floyd | Among the articles about a disaster in China (some dam broke and
Floyd | killed a lot of people), bombings in England, some stuff about
Floyd | Vietnam, and lots and lots of boring politics, there is a cool article
Floyd | about the Viking space probe! The first space ship to the surface of
Floyd | Mars! Will they find water? Martian people? (Unlikely. The orbital
Floyd | probes didn't see any sign of a Martian civilization.) There is a
Floyd | photo and a diagram of the Viking lander on page 3 and you memorize
Floyd | all the parts.
Floyd |
Floyd | You spend a few minutes thinking about being an explorer on the
Floyd | Martian surface, where you'd weigh less than half of what you do on
Floyd | Earth and would be able to jump high in the air like a superhero. If
Floyd | you could do that here, you would leap out of the trailer park, up
Floyd | into the top of the big pine tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take newspaper"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        351
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x chair"
Floyd ]  Lee's Trailer                                        352
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CHAIR
Floyd |
Floyd | Like the rest of Lee's trailer, the table is mostly empty. On the
Floyd | table, a coffee mug.
Floyd |
Floyd | Another World is still blaring on Lee's TV.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "exit"
Floyd ]  C Loop                                               353
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EXIT
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | C Loop
Floyd | C Loop is pretty much like B and D Loops. Rows of trailers on either
Floyd | side, all different colors. The most noteworthy thing on this loop for
Floyd | you is Lee's trailer, though it looks pretty much like every other
Floyd | one.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to B Loop where Honey and Grandpa's trailer is, or you can
Floyd | go back to D Loop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               354
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | D Loop
Floyd | The D Loop of the trailer park is pretty much like the B and C Loops.
Floyd | Rows of trailers on either side, many fringed with teeny tiny gardens
Floyd | of flowers and shrubs. The most noteworthy thing on this loop is the
Floyd | Cat Lady's trailer, painted bright pink and white with an outrageously
Floyd | overflowing flower garden out in front.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can go to the C Loop on the way to Honey and Grandpa's trailer. Or
Floyd | you can go back to the picnic area at the back of the trailer park.
Floyd |
Floyd | The Cat Lady is out in front of her trailer watering her tiny,
Floyd | overflowing garden. She is absently humming to herself. There is a
Floyd | yellow tabby cat rubbing against her legs.
Floyd |
Floyd | The tabby grooms itself carefully.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "ask lady about creek"
Floyd ]  D Loop                                               355
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK LADY ABOUT CREEK
Floyd |
Floyd | "Well, I don't know, honey," the Cat Lady says.
Floyd |
Floyd | You hear a dog barking in the distance on the other side of the
Floyd | tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          356
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Picnic Area
Floyd | At the back of the trailer park, there is a scraggly little picnic
Floyd | area with a patchy lawn that smells like mowed grass. A little cluster
Floyd | of tall trees is against the back fence.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, is the rest of the trailer park starting with D Loop.
Floyd | Through the back gate are the train tracks.
Floyd |
Floyd | There is an impressive red ant hill near the picnic table. Two ants
Floyd | are working together to carry a seed that is bigger than both of them
Floyd | put together.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x seed"
Floyd ]  Picnic Area                                          357
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SEED
Floyd |
Floyd | You see nothing special about the seed.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              358
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Southern Pacific Tracks
Floyd | Railroad tracks cross the old dirt road here in a small rise. The
Floyd | tracks run alongside the trailer park fence in one direction and into
Floyd | a tunnel of green in the other. As you cross the tracks, you see a
Floyd | sign that says "Property of Southern Pacific."
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the tracks and through an open gate is the trailer park. Back
Floyd | the other way is the long dirt road gently sloping down along the
Floyd | creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a mound of rock here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take rock"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              359
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ROCK
Floyd |
Floyd | You pick up one of the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard a ways down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take rock"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              360
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ROCK
Floyd |
Floyd | You pick up one of the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard a ways down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              361
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | You are carrying three rocks, a newspaper, a tuna sandwich, a brown
Floyd | paper bag, inside which are two tuna sandwiches, a metal cube, a
Floyd | penny, and a pail. And your hands are spotted with pine pitch, your
Floyd | ribs still ache, and your arm hurts a little. You are going to get in
Floyd | such big trouble.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take all"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              362
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ALL
Floyd |
Floyd | tuna sandwich: Taken.
Floyd | tuna sandwich: Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard a ways down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take mound"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              363
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE MOUND
Floyd |
Floyd | You pick up one of the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take all rocks"
Floyd ]  Southern Pacific Tracks                              364
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ALL ROCKS
Floyd |
Floyd | You pick up one of the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Long stretch                                         365
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Long stretch
Floyd | This is a really long stretch of the dirt road. You can see the heat
Floyd | shimmering off of the ground. Grass grows up through the middle of the
Floyd | road, and deep rocky ruts suggest it hasn't been used as anything but
Floyd | river access for hikers and fishermen in a long time. The long road is
Floyd | alternately shaded by pines and exposed to the scorching sun. The air
Floyd | smells hot with a particular piney fragrance that always reminds you
Floyd | of the foothills of the Sierras.
Floyd |
Floyd | At one place along this long stretch, there is a trail zigzagging down
Floyd | the bank toward the swimming hole. Otherwise the dirt road goes on for
Floyd | a ways along the creek downstream until it crosses the railroad
Floyd | tracks. Back the other way is the end of the dirt road and the stone
Floyd | bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | Along the road, in a clear stretch on the uphill side of the road, is
Floyd | an impressively tall pine tree that you've climbed before.
Floyd |
Floyd | A dog barking can be heard somewhere down the road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        366
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | As you step out of the oppressive heat, the cool shade is a welcome
Floyd | relief.
Floyd |
Floyd | Swimming hole
Floyd | Down a long wooded trail that zigs down the bank, you emerge from the
Floyd | thick woods, and the trees open up to the sky. The swimming hole lies
Floyd | before you, a deep pool carved out of and surrounded by smooth granite
Floyd | rocks. It is big enough that you can swim like they taught you at the
Floyd | YWCA from one end to the other, and deep enough to dive off the rocks.
Floyd |
Floyd | It is possible to walk along the rocky shore downstream to another
Floyd | spot along the creek. Back up the trail leads through the woods back
Floyd | to the dirt road.
Floyd |
Floyd | You can see a deep pool here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I think we have enough rocks, honest."
Zach says (to Floyd), "go swimming hole"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        367
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO SWIMMING HOLE
Floyd |
Floyd | You look around again to see if you are alone. The path from the dirt
Floyd | road is deep forest and there is no one else at the swimming hole. So
Floyd | you carefully strip down to your skivvies, folding your clothes on the
Floyd | rocks. You leap in! Cold! But you get used to it, and it feels good.
Floyd | Actually, it feels great, as you swim around for a bit. When you get
Floyd | out of the water, you stand in the cool shade, and you get a sudden
Floyd | chill.
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "take all"
Floyd ]  Swimming hole                                        368
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE ALL
Floyd |
Floyd | tennis shoes: Taken.
Floyd | clothes: Taken.
Floyd | tuna sandwich: Taken.
Floyd | tuna sandwich: Taken.
Floyd | tuna sandwich: Taken.
Floyd | brown paper bag: Taken.
Floyd | metal cube: Taken.
Floyd | newspaper: Taken.
Floyd | penny: Taken.
Floyd | pine sap: Try as you might, you can't get if off your hands easily.
Floyd | pail: Taken.
Floyd | rock: Taken.
Floyd | rock: Taken.
Floyd | rock: Taken.
Floyd | rock: Taken.
Floyd | rock: Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go downstream"
Floyd ]  Crossing                                             369
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO DOWNSTREAM
Floyd |
Floyd | You leisurely gather your stuff and pull your clothes back on.
Floyd |
Floyd | You carefully navigate the rocky bank, making your way downstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crossing
Floyd | Here the creek broadens out a little and, except for a place in the
Floyd | middle where the current is swift, there are big stones, boulders
Floyd | really, scattered about in the river.
Floyd |
Floyd | The shoreline ends at a steep bank further downstream, though it looks
Floyd | like you might be able to cross the creek on the boulders in
Floyd | midstream. You can also go back along the rocks upstream.
Floyd |
Floyd | A log has floated down the creek and is wedged between the boulders in
Floyd | the middle of the creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "huzzah"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go boulders"
Floyd ]  Other Shore                                          370
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BOULDERS
Floyd |
Floyd | You are able to hop from boulder to boulder until you get to the
Floyd | middle where there is a sizable gab and a swift current. You balance
Floyd | unsteadily on the driftwood bobbing in the current until you can hop
Floyd | to the nearest boulder on the other side.
Floyd |
Floyd | For a moment, it looks like your efforts might dislodge the drifting
Floyd | log and send it downstream. It totters unsteadily at the edge of the
Floyd | swift current before settling back against the boulders on either side
Floyd | of the gap.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | You made it across the creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | You look back at your precarious bridge. You can't believe you made it
Floyd | over the rocks and over that piece of driftwood! Yeah! Heck with that
Floyd | stupid dog.
Floyd |
Floyd | Now you can make it back to Grandpa and Honey. This is the other side
Floyd | of the river, an area you've never been, but you think it connects
Floyd | with the overgrown blackberry trail. it's darker here and a little
Floyd | cooler. The woods look kind of scary on this side, and it makes you
Floyd | anxious. But you remind yourself that trees are just trees, there is
Floyd | nothing to be afraid of in the woods.
Floyd |
Floyd | Other Shore
Floyd | You are on the far side of the creek where trees come right down to
Floyd | the water. A wooded trail goes into the forest.
Floyd |
Floyd | The creek here curves around in a funny way, but you're pretty sure
Floyd | that this trail is the same as the overgrown part of blackberry trail.
Floyd | That was this way, right? This trail is darker and more wooded, but it
Floyd | looks like it gets lighter up ahead. Back the way you came, you can
Floyd | get most of the way across the creek by hopping from boulder to
Floyd | boulder.
Floyd |
Floyd | A log has floated down the creek and is wedged in the boulders in the
Floyd | middle of the creek.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Woo!"
Zach says, "I was going to build a dam, but that works too"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go trail"
Floyd ]  Wooded Trail                                         371
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Wooded Trail
Floyd | You are on a wooded trail going back toward Honey and Grandpa's
Floyd | blackberry picking spot. You think. You're pretty sure. You hear the
Floyd | creek over there on your left. Or is that another little stream?
Floyd |
Floyd | Best to keep going to the blackberry trail. It should connect up here
Floyd | in a bit. You look back the way you came. You could always go back
Floyd | across the creek. But then there's the dog.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "How did the log get moved?"
Zach asks, "Us swimming?"
DavidW says, "hm. ok."
Zach asks, "Pure luck?"
Zach says (to Floyd), "go blackberry trail"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           372
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO BLACKBERRY TRAIL
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Dark Woods
Floyd | You are no longer sure where you are. The woods look familiar and
Floyd | altogether strange. It's difficult to get your bearings.
Floyd |
Floyd | Here there is a bright patch in the woods.
Floyd |
Floyd | Whew, in the distance you can just make out a giant fern. You can see
Floyd | trails leading into the woods, but you are no longer sure which one
Floyd | takes you back to either the other shore or to the blackberry trail.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "x patch"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           373
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X PATCH
Floyd |
Floyd | This is a bright patch in the woods with darker woods all around.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "x fern"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           373
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FERN
Floyd |
Floyd | You can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go fern"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           374
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO FERN
Floyd |
Floyd | You follow an uncertain path through the wood.
Floyd |
Floyd | Dark Woods
Floyd | You are not completely certain which way to go. The woods look
Floyd | familiar and altogether strange. It's difficult to get your bearings.
Floyd |
Floyd | Here there is a giant fern.
Floyd |
Floyd | Okay, that looks familiar, just over there a huge madrone tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | Finally, your underwear is drying out.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go tree"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           375
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | They're not something you can enter.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "go madrone tree"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           376
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GO MADRONE TREE
Floyd |
Floyd | You bushwhack your way through the underbrush.
Floyd |
Floyd | Dark Woods
Floyd | You are confused. The woods look familiar and altogether strange. It's
Floyd | difficult to get your bearings.
Floyd |
Floyd | Here there is a huge madrone tree.
Floyd |
Floyd | In the distance, there is a broad trail.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Can we climb this madrone? Should we?"
genericgeekgirl says (to Floyd), "climb madrone"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CLIMB MADRONE
Floyd |
Floyd | This is no time for that. You are feeling desperate to find your way
Floyd | back to your Honey and Grandpa. You fight back tears and push on.
Floyd |
Floyd | The afternoon shadows are lengthening and it is slowly getting on
Floyd | toward evening. You should be home by now. Honey and Grandpa will be
Floyd | worried. You fight back a brief wave of misery and trudge on.
Floyd |
Floyd | But it's no use. Part of the time you are pretty sure you are going in
Floyd | circles. The rest of the time you are scared you are getting lost
Floyd | deeper in the forest.
Floyd |
Floyd | For a while there, you felt you were close to finding your way back,
Floyd | but now everything looks completely unfamiliar -- and to be honest, a
Floyd | bit sinister. Like the forest is trying to keep you here, to
Floyd | lead you astray, lead you deeper into the woods. The trees lean in
Floyd | toward you. The underbrush grabs as your clothing.
Floyd |
Floyd | But no, that's stupid. You fight back panic. It's nobody's fault but
Floyd | your own. You should have been more careful, more observant. A good
Floyd | explorer scout would never get lost like this. Stupid stupid stupid,
Floyd | you berate yourself.
Floyd |
Floyd | Again, you think about your Honey and Grandpa at home. The smell of
Floyd | blackberry jam cooking. Watching TV on the floor with your grandpa.
Floyd | And your mom.  It's all too much.
Floyd |
Floyd | You have to admit it: You are hopelessly lost.
Floyd |
Floyd | You sit down right where you are and sob miserably.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | When your tears subside a little, you can't help thinking about the
Floyd | way the light sparkled under the water, how the Cat Lady, Sharon,
Floyd | seems so lonely even with all her cats, how the dog looked as she
Floyd | tried to squirm under the fence, how Lee is not so bad and maybe is
Floyd | your new friend, and how tiny everything looked from the top of the
Floyd | tallest tree in the world.
Floyd |
Floyd | You take stock of yourself: You are tired and miserable and scared.
Floyd | And your hands are spotted with pine pitch, your ribs still ache, and
Floyd | your arm hurts a little. You are going to get in such big trouble. But
Floyd | you are also perceptive, brave, resourceful, sweet, persistent, and
Floyd | unafraid. Maybe it will be okay.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
genericgeekgirl says, "Hm."
genericgeekgirl pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Part 2
Floyd | Survival
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Now my old world is gone for dead
Floyd |  Cos I can't get it out of my head.
Floyd |  -- Electric Light Orchestra, 1975
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
genericgeekgirl pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           377
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |     *** To be continued... ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
genericgeekgirl says, "Bah."
DavidW says, "what?!"
DavidW says, "I feel a bit cheated. Ever so slightly."
genericgeekgirl says, "Yeah."
genericgeekgirl says, "Looking at reviews now, that seems to be the general opinion."
DavidW says, "I vote to eat all the sandwiches."
genericgeekgirl says, "I suppose we'll need to in order to survive."
Zach says, "Hmm"
Zach says (to Floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           376
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Dark Woods
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "credits"
Floyd ]  Dark Woods                                           376
Floyd | >
Floyd | > CREDITS
Floyd |
Floyd | Bear Creek was created by Wes Modes. Inform 7, in which it was
Floyd | written, is the work of Graham Nelson. The IF authors Emily Short,
Floyd | Eric Eve, and Aaron Reed provided helpful extensions to Inform. The
Floyd | author is grateful for the testing feedback offered by Aaron Reed, Sia
Floyd | Delacosta, Corey Ostman, Katherine Dalgleish, Jennifer Bushard, and
Floyd | Mari Jacobson. The cover are was generously provided by Darrin Barry.




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